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10/14/2019 c1 7lenasdarlings
so cute!
5/28/2014 c1 7audiblyausten
I wish the musical had really ended this way! This story ties up all the loose ends in a lovely manner: why Eliza returned, whether Henry would ever give her reason to stay, and how they would maintain their precariously-balanced relationship. Eliza also expresses her new-found outward courage and independence - she will stay for now, but can and will leave him if she so wishes. I love it! My only other critique is that you wrote "Have I not treated you good". It should be "well". Great story!

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