for To Save An Angel7/30/2013 c11 
17Miss Nemesis
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE. I CANT SEE MY KEYS CORRECTYL TOO MANY TEARS, HOLD UP PLEASE.
...
*five minutes later*
Okay, I think I might be okay now...
Answer: Haha, my first thought was that you meant, like, as a lover (to which my answer would be Night from Absolute Boyfriend or Tamaki from OHSHC), but then I thought you probably mean like blood relations, sooo... Hmmm, this is a lot harder... Well, Sam was the first to come to mind, since they're all about family and I think he and I would get along better than me and Dean. (Or anyone else in their family for that matter.)
17Miss NemesisWHAT HAVE YOU DONE. I CANT SEE MY KEYS CORRECTYL TOO MANY TEARS, HOLD UP PLEASE.
...
*five minutes later*
Okay, I think I might be okay now...
Answer: Haha, my first thought was that you meant, like, as a lover (to which my answer would be Night from Absolute Boyfriend or Tamaki from OHSHC), but then I thought you probably mean like blood relations, sooo... Hmmm, this is a lot harder... Well, Sam was the first to come to mind, since they're all about family and I think he and I would get along better than me and Dean. (Or anyone else in their family for that matter.)
7/30/2013 c9 Miss Nemesis
wrrfesfqawej I have no idea who Mataton is. Guess I'm just not there yet. ( -_-")
Aaaaaah, piggy backs... I always hated those as a kid. I don't like being up really high. O_O
You've probably already been told this, buuuut... Well, this chapter is... double printed? It repeats itself. (Finishes and then repeats.) After the first time there is something added at the beginning, so I think maybe you edited it and maybe just messed up a little, but... I dunno.
Answer: I have a cat who is kind of a pain in the ass. She put a hole in my Doctor Who poster and chewed through two pairs of my head phones. (Because of this she is no longer allowed in my room.)
wrrfesfqawej I have no idea who Mataton is. Guess I'm just not there yet. ( -_-")
Aaaaaah, piggy backs... I always hated those as a kid. I don't like being up really high. O_O
You've probably already been told this, buuuut... Well, this chapter is... double printed? It repeats itself. (Finishes and then repeats.) After the first time there is something added at the beginning, so I think maybe you edited it and maybe just messed up a little, but... I dunno.
Answer: I have a cat who is kind of a pain in the ass. She put a hole in my Doctor Who poster and chewed through two pairs of my head phones. (Because of this she is no longer allowed in my room.)
7/30/2013 c8 Miss Nemesis
" -all the other guys were fictional or on tv. Like Robert Down Jr." I freaking lost it there, exploding with laughter. Oh, Dean, I know how you feel. *sigh*
Oh dear, I'm a little frightened to see how Cas' Mom will react to him staying for dinner. Especially with how he acted to Dean simply asking him to.
Also, I really don't think I can even decide on just /one/ favorite episode, or even multiple for that matter! XD
" -all the other guys were fictional or on tv. Like Robert Down Jr." I freaking lost it there, exploding with laughter. Oh, Dean, I know how you feel. *sigh*
Oh dear, I'm a little frightened to see how Cas' Mom will react to him staying for dinner. Especially with how he acted to Dean simply asking him to.
Also, I really don't think I can even decide on just /one/ favorite episode, or even multiple for that matter! XD
7/30/2013 c7 Miss Nemesis
Okay, first, I think I ship Sabriel even more now, thank you.
Second, wait, why was Sammy so sad in this one? I mean, I know he should be, considering what happened with Dean, but before he said that it was kind of okay, right? Or was he just saying that? Or is it something else? I'm a little confused.
To answer your question: Personally, I don't mind long authors notes, because they make me feel like I'm connecting with the author. (This is why I generally kind of like to write long ones myself.)
PS, sorry if all these reviews get annoying. I know the story has like 19 chapters up at the moment, but personally, I'd like to know what my readers think throughout my story. So I like to give other authors the same, y'know?
Okay, first, I think I ship Sabriel even more now, thank you.
Second, wait, why was Sammy so sad in this one? I mean, I know he should be, considering what happened with Dean, but before he said that it was kind of okay, right? Or was he just saying that? Or is it something else? I'm a little confused.
To answer your question: Personally, I don't mind long authors notes, because they make me feel like I'm connecting with the author. (This is why I generally kind of like to write long ones myself.)
PS, sorry if all these reviews get annoying. I know the story has like 19 chapters up at the moment, but personally, I'd like to know what my readers think throughout my story. So I like to give other authors the same, y'know?
7/30/2013 c5 Miss Nemesis
Aaaaaaww, not Dean, too! *hugs both him and Cas* I promise, you two, it will aaaaall be okay! ( T_T )
Them eating ice cream together was like the most adorable thing, by the way.
Aaaaaaww, not Dean, too! *hugs both him and Cas* I promise, you two, it will aaaaall be okay! ( T_T )
Them eating ice cream together was like the most adorable thing, by the way.
7/30/2013 c3 Miss Nemesis
sdfcmewf I'm really liking this so far! Generally I'm not all that into AU type stories, but I actually really like this one!
I laughed so hard at Ruby giving Sam cocaine. Hilarious
At first I was like "what's 40 minutes in heaven" but I got it like right away.
Cassssssssss, my poor babyyyy! ( ;-; ) *hugs*
To answer your question, I first got into Supernatural because of tumblr. Seeing it all over persuaded me into watching it. (Speaking of which, I just followed you!)
sdfcmewf I'm really liking this so far! Generally I'm not all that into AU type stories, but I actually really like this one!
I laughed so hard at Ruby giving Sam cocaine. Hilarious
At first I was like "what's 40 minutes in heaven" but I got it like right away.
Cassssssssss, my poor babyyyy! ( ;-; ) *hugs*
To answer your question, I first got into Supernatural because of tumblr. Seeing it all over persuaded me into watching it. (Speaking of which, I just followed you!)
7/27/2013 c4 MaisieC
Hello!
You uploaded the same chapter twice (Ch3&4). Anyways, the story is a bit confusing for me, like why was Dean's face bloody? Because of Castiel's cuts? I thought they weren't bleeding when they kissed.
I think your ideas and the plot are very good but the story is a bit too fast-paced. You could've used a bit more description. But this story is already finished so why am I complaining, right? :D I'm just gonna read the whole story now.
Hello!
You uploaded the same chapter twice (Ch3&4). Anyways, the story is a bit confusing for me, like why was Dean's face bloody? Because of Castiel's cuts? I thought they weren't bleeding when they kissed.
I think your ideas and the plot are very good but the story is a bit too fast-paced. You could've used a bit more description. But this story is already finished so why am I complaining, right? :D I'm just gonna read the whole story now.
7/5/2013 c15 pattycake13
I normally don't do this till the very end if the story is compete but my fave book, has to be the rising tide by jeff shaara.. fan fic is twist and shout by... ok I for got who but its on archive of our own and I absolutly recomend it if u haven't read it yet!
I normally don't do this till the very end if the story is compete but my fave book, has to be the rising tide by jeff shaara.. fan fic is twist and shout by... ok I for got who but its on archive of our own and I absolutly recomend it if u haven't read it yet!
6/26/2013 c9 Guest
hey, um, i know you posted this a while ago, but it's really awesome :) so thanks for writing and for writing so much!
hey, um, i know you posted this a while ago, but it's really awesome :) so thanks for writing and for writing so much!
6/28/2013 c19 12Dance-Axel-Dance
I really really liked this:D I would most definitely read the sequel:) Plez Plez Plez make one. Pretty plez? Cas with a cherry pie on top? :D That just SOUNDS adorable lmao. As far as what I would like to see in the future... I'm not quite sure. Maybe have Cas' father make an appearance? Or Maybe Alistair and Luci somehow intervene? :/ Hmm Maybe Cas' mum mould try and get Cas to come back home? IDK, Either way, I'm sure it'll be great:3 I can't wait for your (hopefully created) sequel! :DD Have a glorious and most fan-fucking-tastic day:)
12Dance-Axel-DanceI really really liked this:D I would most definitely read the sequel:) Plez Plez Plez make one. Pretty plez? Cas with a cherry pie on top? :D That just SOUNDS adorable lmao. As far as what I would like to see in the future... I'm not quite sure. Maybe have Cas' father make an appearance? Or Maybe Alistair and Luci somehow intervene? :/ Hmm Maybe Cas' mum mould try and get Cas to come back home? IDK, Either way, I'm sure it'll be great:3 I can't wait for your (hopefully created) sequel! :DD Have a glorious and most fan-fucking-tastic day:)
6/21/2013 c19 AmberLeigh
I LOVED IT :3 goooooodjob!
I LOVED IT :3 goooooodjob!
6/8/2013 c19 6animemaster26
*stands up clapping and brushes tear out of eye* Beautiful...just...Beautiful...this hits a tender note in my heart, I use to be a cutter, it got so bad it got to Cas' level...I cried for your story, god, it was so good, and well told, Dean was a well played Character, I loved the quirk Jo had, but Cas...he was a work of art, well done, and thank you for writing this
6animemaster26*stands up clapping and brushes tear out of eye* Beautiful...just...Beautiful...this hits a tender note in my heart, I use to be a cutter, it got so bad it got to Cas' level...I cried for your story, god, it was so good, and well told, Dean was a well played Character, I loved the quirk Jo had, but Cas...he was a work of art, well done, and thank you for writing this
6/4/2013 c19 Tina
I did enjoy this story but it was kind of frusterating to get through because of editing. I would read the sequal if the editing was better. :)
I did enjoy this story but it was kind of frusterating to get through because of editing. I would read the sequal if the editing was better. :)
6/1/2013 c19 Guest
Ill be blunt: the writing and editing could have been a ton better. But the story was great! I love how Bela and the demons were all in rehab... And yay for destiel and sabriel! I did enjoy it. But please edit better.
Ill be blunt: the writing and editing could have been a ton better. But the story was great! I love how Bela and the demons were all in rehab... And yay for destiel and sabriel! I did enjoy it. But please edit better.