for White Flags6/18/2013 c56 
44TheShortOne1993
The beginning just had me giggling! First with the mess up between Gideon and Fabian and then the mix up between moody and moony. Haha... (I think i might be going insane, things which aren't supposed to be funny have me guffawing) and I loved the inclusion about how moody got his wooden leg! It's these tiny attention to details that makes your story-writing far more superior than most on this site. I kid you not.
Serves Peter right, I don't care, I don't like him. Stupid disloyal rat.
Hmm...I guess it's not very nice to remind some one that they owe their lives to you but at least James is guilty about it. Besides, they're going to save Sirius and Lily. Well it seems Sirius and Lily could certainly do with some saving...but somehow I can see those two managing to get all on their own. I'm sure given time, they'd be able to do something. Lateral thinking and outside the box thinking, m'dears!
Thanks for being true to your word and updating!
Ps: I swear I will answer all the PMs and especially the character analysis in due course-just got to get the pesky exams out the way!
-vitzy-
44TheShortOne1993The beginning just had me giggling! First with the mess up between Gideon and Fabian and then the mix up between moody and moony. Haha... (I think i might be going insane, things which aren't supposed to be funny have me guffawing) and I loved the inclusion about how moody got his wooden leg! It's these tiny attention to details that makes your story-writing far more superior than most on this site. I kid you not.
Serves Peter right, I don't care, I don't like him. Stupid disloyal rat.
Hmm...I guess it's not very nice to remind some one that they owe their lives to you but at least James is guilty about it. Besides, they're going to save Sirius and Lily. Well it seems Sirius and Lily could certainly do with some saving...but somehow I can see those two managing to get all on their own. I'm sure given time, they'd be able to do something. Lateral thinking and outside the box thinking, m'dears!
Thanks for being true to your word and updating!
Ps: I swear I will answer all the PMs and especially the character analysis in due course-just got to get the pesky exams out the way!
-vitzy-
6/18/2013 c55 Dolodi
Well, that was sudden. Like the change of events. Don't like Lily and Sirius being captured though...
Well, that was sudden. Like the change of events. Don't like Lily and Sirius being captured though...
6/18/2013 c1 Katietheawesome
The story is great I love it so much! My friends and I are complete harry potter fans and we've been reading White Flags since chapter 15( I think) it's really good ! I really think of lily James Sirius etc like they are in the story. How many more chapters are you going to write?
The story is great I love it so much! My friends and I are complete harry potter fans and we've been reading White Flags since chapter 15( I think) it's really good ! I really think of lily James Sirius etc like they are in the story. How many more chapters are you going to write?
6/16/2013 c53 Guest
Pls update
Pls update
6/16/2013 c53 Guest
This is really great I love it pls continue!
This is really great I love it pls continue!
6/15/2013 c53 chandira
good job
good job
6/17/2013 c55 4Love-Pink26
Oh no. Well at least they're still at the battle sight...it would make it worse if Voldemort captured them. At least the stand a chance of a rescue. I think James is entitled to a little revenge. Maybe he and Remus can hold him off until Dumbledore arrives. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next! ).
4Love-Pink26Oh no. Well at least they're still at the battle sight...it would make it worse if Voldemort captured them. At least the stand a chance of a rescue. I think James is entitled to a little revenge. Maybe he and Remus can hold him off until Dumbledore arrives. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next! ).
6/17/2013 c54 Love-Pink26
Phew. And here I was thinking they were in trouble. I thought someone blamed it framed them for something. I should have know Dumbledore and McGonagall couldn't be hoodwinked though. P. Peter doesn't deserve his friends kindness...not the first (or last) time I wish I could jump in the story and tell them the truth. Sigh. Really great chapter! Onto the next one!
Phew. And here I was thinking they were in trouble. I thought someone blamed it framed them for something. I should have know Dumbledore and McGonagall couldn't be hoodwinked though. P. Peter doesn't deserve his friends kindness...not the first (or last) time I wish I could jump in the story and tell them the truth. Sigh. Really great chapter! Onto the next one!
6/17/2013 c55 Potterbert
This story is sometimes calm, but at other times, fast, exciting, and full of on-your-toes action. ATTENTION: THIS IS MY FAVORITE HARRY POTTER FANFIC THAT I HAVE EVER READ!
-Potterbert
This story is sometimes calm, but at other times, fast, exciting, and full of on-your-toes action. ATTENTION: THIS IS MY FAVORITE HARRY POTTER FANFIC THAT I HAVE EVER READ!
-Potterbert
6/17/2013 c55 44TheShortOne1993
Oh man I just remembered thrice defied...it's part of the prophecy. You're going to make us see James and lily (and presumably the rest) get hurt and manage to escape voldemort 3 times? I love action scenes...and you do write them with full detail and flavor so it's a pleasure reading!
44TheShortOne1993Oh man I just remembered thrice defied...it's part of the prophecy. You're going to make us see James and lily (and presumably the rest) get hurt and manage to escape voldemort 3 times? I love action scenes...and you do write them with full detail and flavor so it's a pleasure reading!