for White Flags5/16/2018 c60 LtKettch
The Portus prank and James and Sirius visit to Lily’s had me in tears of laughter. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
The Portus prank and James and Sirius visit to Lily’s had me in tears of laughter. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
5/16/2018 c60 LtKettch
I absolutely loved this story. You really captured the spirit of the Marauders.
I absolutely loved this story. You really captured the spirit of the Marauders.
3/22/2018 c39 Guest
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3/1/2018 c60 
2darkpheonix31
Very nice story. I loved James and Sirius' interactions and liked how you developed the relationships of all the characters. I especially like that you made a point of showing that Sirius really was James' best friend and the others were second to that.
Personally i'm not a fan of Remus since I feel he consistently lets Harry down in the books (never seeking him out before Hogwarts or even during 1st and 2nd year and then trying to avoid telling Harry that he even knew James st all let alone that he was good friends with him. He never writes him a single letter after 3rd year and then despite knowing how badly the dementors affect him, Remus uses Lily's death to emotionally blackmail him by claiming that her sacrifice meant nothing to Harry). Needless to say i found the idea of Remus being Harry's 'godmother' quite funny but also unrealistic. Still great story and i look foward to reading your other stories about Harry and Sirius
2darkpheonix31Very nice story. I loved James and Sirius' interactions and liked how you developed the relationships of all the characters. I especially like that you made a point of showing that Sirius really was James' best friend and the others were second to that.
Personally i'm not a fan of Remus since I feel he consistently lets Harry down in the books (never seeking him out before Hogwarts or even during 1st and 2nd year and then trying to avoid telling Harry that he even knew James st all let alone that he was good friends with him. He never writes him a single letter after 3rd year and then despite knowing how badly the dementors affect him, Remus uses Lily's death to emotionally blackmail him by claiming that her sacrifice meant nothing to Harry). Needless to say i found the idea of Remus being Harry's 'godmother' quite funny but also unrealistic. Still great story and i look foward to reading your other stories about Harry and Sirius
9/1/2017 c37 Guest
There's a problem in your grammar. Instead of saying "the boy called james, peter, etc. You can just say their name to make it short
There's a problem in your grammar. Instead of saying "the boy called james, peter, etc. You can just say their name to make it short
9/1/2017 c35 Guest
The way your story is construct is a mess. The way you explain your story is not brief enough for us readers to understand your writing. There is ALWAYS something missing in the way you write your story. Your story is not detailed enough. Like the part in the story where you didnt mentioned Rookwood as the one who disguises James which makes me get puzzled.
The way your story is construct is a mess. The way you explain your story is not brief enough for us readers to understand your writing. There is ALWAYS something missing in the way you write your story. Your story is not detailed enough. Like the part in the story where you didnt mentioned Rookwood as the one who disguises James which makes me get puzzled.
7/17/2017 c60 ink7blot
Her head was swimming. Of course, there was the familiar feeling of approval and sad nostalgia that always came every time she finished a story, but this time there was also the panic that came with the knowledge of what else would happen that Halloween night. This time there was also the need to shower gratitude on the author. This time ... this time, she could have floated on cloud nine and yet want to melt into the ground and lived in either of those places comfortably.
-my current mood in a short paragraph, by Scarlet L.
Her head was swimming. Of course, there was the familiar feeling of approval and sad nostalgia that always came every time she finished a story, but this time there was also the panic that came with the knowledge of what else would happen that Halloween night. This time there was also the need to shower gratitude on the author. This time ... this time, she could have floated on cloud nine and yet want to melt into the ground and lived in either of those places comfortably.
-my current mood in a short paragraph, by Scarlet L.
7/17/2017 c50 ink7blot
As the fiftieth chapter drew to a close, she was overcome with the desire to embrace the author for the excessive amounts of content and fluff encased in that single story.
-my current mood in a sentence, by Scarlet L.
As the fiftieth chapter drew to a close, she was overcome with the desire to embrace the author for the excessive amounts of content and fluff encased in that single story.
-my current mood in a sentence, by Scarlet L.
7/17/2017 c40 ink7blot
Everything was fine and she could finally breath a sigh of relief. Now if someone could just call the rodent exterminators...
-my current mood in two sentences, by Scarlet L.
Everything was fine and she could finally breath a sigh of relief. Now if someone could just call the rodent exterminators...
-my current mood in two sentences, by Scarlet L.
7/17/2017 c30 ink7blot
She wanted to scream, to break something, to sob, and yet none of these urges were more important than the one to do all of these things at once.
-my current mood in another sentence, by Scarlet L.
She wanted to scream, to break something, to sob, and yet none of these urges were more important than the one to do all of these things at once.
-my current mood in another sentence, by Scarlet L.
7/9/2017 c20 ink7blot
It was the end of Chapter Twenty. And she was beginning to revise her plans to maim the author of the fic for writing such an agonizing slow-burn.
-my current mood in two sentences by Scarlet L.
It was the end of Chapter Twenty. And she was beginning to revise her plans to maim the author of the fic for writing such an agonizing slow-burn.
-my current mood in two sentences by Scarlet L.
7/9/2017 c10 ink7blot
"It's been ten fucking chapters and I need this ship to happen soon," she said right before she saw that the story was sixty chapters long.
-my current mood in a single sentence, by Scarlet L.
"It's been ten fucking chapters and I need this ship to happen soon," she said right before she saw that the story was sixty chapters long.
-my current mood in a single sentence, by Scarlet L.