for White Flags4/30/2014 c5 
2midnight red
In your summary when you said "rather attached to Sirius" I expected something else. Amazing though...
2midnight redIn your summary when you said "rather attached to Sirius" I expected something else. Amazing though...
3/17/2014 c1 1Karrin
i don't know what it is about ur writing but i cant help my self i am rereading this fic for about the 6th time and it never gets old :) ur work is amazing!
1Karrini don't know what it is about ur writing but i cant help my self i am rereading this fic for about the 6th time and it never gets old :) ur work is amazing!
3/5/2014 c1 krogers661
I can't believe this fic doesn't have more reviews, I've been reading avidly for days and loved it! It was the most believable (for me) Mauraders story I've ever read, and in my mind I think it will become their "official" story from now on! X
I can't believe this fic doesn't have more reviews, I've been reading avidly for days and loved it! It was the most believable (for me) Mauraders story I've ever read, and in my mind I think it will become their "official" story from now on! X
2/15/2014 c60 1SiriPhoenix
OMG. I started reading this at some point months ago after I fell in love with "Innocent" and have been reading it slowly over breaks, and I'd had niggling thoughts that some bits sounded familiar from other stories, but only just realized that this was the beginning of the whole saga (I love the godmother bit - that was what finally tipped me off, btw). You are a god.
1SiriPhoenixOMG. I started reading this at some point months ago after I fell in love with "Innocent" and have been reading it slowly over breaks, and I'd had niggling thoughts that some bits sounded familiar from other stories, but only just realized that this was the beginning of the whole saga (I love the godmother bit - that was what finally tipped me off, btw). You are a god.
10/30/2013 c1 ashti
cool
cool
9/18/2013 c60 13Purple Pizza
Brilliant story, loved how James proposed to Lily. It was also quite funny when her parents had to explain all the muggle stuff to James and sirius.
However I'm not really that fond of the ending, it didn't really match the story. It would have been better as a 1shot, I think.
You are definitely a brilliant author, and I love all your stories. :)
13Purple PizzaBrilliant story, loved how James proposed to Lily. It was also quite funny when her parents had to explain all the muggle stuff to James and sirius.
However I'm not really that fond of the ending, it didn't really match the story. It would have been better as a 1shot, I think.
You are definitely a brilliant author, and I love all your stories. :)
8/29/2013 c60 1Atilia Dawn Black
Love this story, I started reading your other story first with Harry and Sirius, which I also love by the way, and was so excited to see this when I got caught up with that one. Now I'm excited to get to your other stories!
1Atilia Dawn BlackLove this story, I started reading your other story first with Harry and Sirius, which I also love by the way, and was so excited to see this when I got caught up with that one. Now I'm excited to get to your other stories!
8/1/2013 c60 4Marilee Susan Way
You are a wonderful, wonderful writer! Everything was so perfect-characterizations, dialogue, never too much description, but not too little either. I think you did the characters perfect justice. They were all completely true to their canon counterparts and it was really just like reading the actual HP series. So thank you, thank you for writing!
My favorite parts were these:
- Snape giving James the warning about having a traitor amongst them.
- James proposing to Lily while in the middle of fighting Voldemort.
- The part where you slipped in this awesome, mind-blowing question from Dumbledore: "Did you really disarm Voldemort?" Lily: "Yes, sir." Dumbledore: "What do you know about wand lore?" I about died in awe of your cleverness there.
- The fact that James is the one who made Mad-Eye's fake leg according to you.
- And of course this last chapter. It was so, so good and perfect. And absolutely chilling. I felt like I just wanted to reach in and tell these lovely characters to run! Run for your lives, tragedy's come a-knockin! It was almost painful not being able to do just that!
As for me, I've been stuck in an airport all day so this has proved a wonderful way to pass the time! I was reading on my phone and unable to review properly so I had to wait until I landed and then log onto a computer so I could get around to telling you what a fabulous story you have here. Thanks so much for writing! I look forward to seeing some of your other work. :)
4Marilee Susan WayYou are a wonderful, wonderful writer! Everything was so perfect-characterizations, dialogue, never too much description, but not too little either. I think you did the characters perfect justice. They were all completely true to their canon counterparts and it was really just like reading the actual HP series. So thank you, thank you for writing!
My favorite parts were these:
- Snape giving James the warning about having a traitor amongst them.
- James proposing to Lily while in the middle of fighting Voldemort.
- The part where you slipped in this awesome, mind-blowing question from Dumbledore: "Did you really disarm Voldemort?" Lily: "Yes, sir." Dumbledore: "What do you know about wand lore?" I about died in awe of your cleverness there.
- The fact that James is the one who made Mad-Eye's fake leg according to you.
- And of course this last chapter. It was so, so good and perfect. And absolutely chilling. I felt like I just wanted to reach in and tell these lovely characters to run! Run for your lives, tragedy's come a-knockin! It was almost painful not being able to do just that!
As for me, I've been stuck in an airport all day so this has proved a wonderful way to pass the time! I was reading on my phone and unable to review properly so I had to wait until I landed and then log onto a computer so I could get around to telling you what a fabulous story you have here. Thanks so much for writing! I look forward to seeing some of your other work. :)
7/23/2013 c60 4Magic and the Marauders
IT'S SO SAD! WHY DID THEY HAVE TO DIE?
Great Jily, I'm writing one myself, extremely hard to do. I'm not very good at it, but you definitely are. Keep it up!
-MM
4Magic and the MaraudersIT'S SO SAD! WHY DID THEY HAVE TO DIE?
Great Jily, I'm writing one myself, extremely hard to do. I'm not very good at it, but you definitely are. Keep it up!
-MM