for Mass Effect: Testament of the Last American Soldier6/23 c2 DavidTorpid
I can't decide if you are purposely making the MCS thoughts incredibly annoying and memey or if you are just a shit writer who likes to break your readers' sod. I would suggest maybe looking up the word characterization and giving it a good study before picking up the pen again.
I can't decide if you are purposely making the MCS thoughts incredibly annoying and memey or if you are just a shit writer who likes to break your readers' sod. I would suggest maybe looking up the word characterization and giving it a good study before picking up the pen again.
12/18/2022 c37 
3arawiguM
And while Blade is grown man, he didn’t once feel a stab of pain that Shep wouldn’t have considered him a partner at unless she dropped another man. Love sucks, but I’d have hoped he could’ve moved on from that love-sickness. I’m not going to stop reading tho. Badass story
3arawiguMAnd while Blade is grown man, he didn’t once feel a stab of pain that Shep wouldn’t have considered him a partner at unless she dropped another man. Love sucks, but I’d have hoped he could’ve moved on from that love-sickness. I’m not going to stop reading tho. Badass story
11/28/2022 c2 GloGang214
so basically he's a gaurd dog now. pre programmed brainwashing to help Shepard probably.
so basically he's a gaurd dog now. pre programmed brainwashing to help Shepard probably.
10/2/2022 c39 Spartanhybrid1.5
Great story once I picked it up I absolutely could not put it down till I finish reading this looking forward to seeing eventual updates but definitely adding to my favorites an watch list
Great story once I picked it up I absolutely could not put it down till I finish reading this looking forward to seeing eventual updates but definitely adding to my favorites an watch list
8/13/2022 c2 5SaucyHandles
I really liked the first chapter and your writing is better than 85% of the authors on this site, but this second chapter showed this isn't going to be for me. Keep on writing and take care!
5SaucyHandlesI really liked the first chapter and your writing is better than 85% of the authors on this site, but this second chapter showed this isn't going to be for me. Keep on writing and take care!
5/2/2021 c18 KyuubiRULESA11
WAIT WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON NOW. LAST CHAPTER WE HAD ROLAND THEN ROY, NOW WHATEVER THE HELL THIS IS. WHERE EVEN AM I. IS IT CAUSE IM HIGH. OR AM I STUPID. SERIOUSLY. Also just wanna say this is an awesome story just confusing for me sometimes.
WAIT WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON NOW. LAST CHAPTER WE HAD ROLAND THEN ROY, NOW WHATEVER THE HELL THIS IS. WHERE EVEN AM I. IS IT CAUSE IM HIGH. OR AM I STUPID. SERIOUSLY. Also just wanna say this is an awesome story just confusing for me sometimes.
3/24/2021 c39 Resurrection99
What a fucking ride. This was a good ass story. It sucks that it's dead tho.
What a fucking ride. This was a good ass story. It sucks that it's dead tho.