for indulgence9/4/2020 c1 
1Grapevine Fires
Dude your stories are so fucking good. "Clove's knife unzips her cheek" ? So good from the literal first sentence.
1Grapevine FiresDude your stories are so fucking good. "Clove's knife unzips her cheek" ? So good from the literal first sentence.
3/10/2018 c1 Guest
Very nice. Finnick is just the kind of friend who would do this. This was nice. I could have done without the fingering bit with gale though. I cannot really see that happening after Peeta’s death. Especially with her barely thinking of him
Very nice. Finnick is just the kind of friend who would do this. This was nice. I could have done without the fingering bit with gale though. I cannot really see that happening after Peeta’s death. Especially with her barely thinking of him
2/26/2014 c1 2FireRebel
Um wow that was kinda depressing. Ha uh powerful though. Really descriptive and just captured that harsh emotions that truly are from these games. Nice.
2FireRebelUm wow that was kinda depressing. Ha uh powerful though. Really descriptive and just captured that harsh emotions that truly are from these games. Nice.
2/22/2014 c1 toolazytologin
Oh my god- this made me sob. Beautiful.
Oh my god- this made me sob. Beautiful.
12/16/2013 c1 Guest
I don't normally leave reviews bc I'm lazy but I had to with this story! It's just amazing and I actually teared up a couple of times hope you write more like this
Xx
I don't normally leave reviews bc I'm lazy but I had to with this story! It's just amazing and I actually teared up a couple of times hope you write more like this
Xx
5/2/2013 c1 PondWinchesterHolmes
I'm typing this review as I read your fic for the umpteenth time.
Nice action at the beginning, really sucked me in. I'd love it if your writing had a little more clarity, though.
Random, slightly disjointed sentences of sloppy kisses and Peeta puking up his own blood. Not my cup of tea, but whatever.
"Out of all the Capitol freaks, she spots an oddity. She spots normal, tanned flesh and makeup-less eyes, the colors brown and copper instead of pink and blue."
Mmmm. Love this bit.
"I want you to," she says. She is surprised at how wet it makes her to just be naked beside him. It's so private, so intimate. She wiggles her hips the tiniest fraction of an inch, trying to feel something. Gale grabs the back of her head and kisses her and his tongue in her mouth makes her want to groan."
Ick. Hate the detailed cliche image/sensation thing.
Katniss/Finnick pairing? Ugh.
But yeah...that was...amazing. *drooling*
Ahhh. You had me on the edge of my seat, and that's impressive.
Anyway.
*In awe.*
I'm typing this review as I read your fic for the umpteenth time.
Nice action at the beginning, really sucked me in. I'd love it if your writing had a little more clarity, though.
Random, slightly disjointed sentences of sloppy kisses and Peeta puking up his own blood. Not my cup of tea, but whatever.
"Out of all the Capitol freaks, she spots an oddity. She spots normal, tanned flesh and makeup-less eyes, the colors brown and copper instead of pink and blue."
Mmmm. Love this bit.
"I want you to," she says. She is surprised at how wet it makes her to just be naked beside him. It's so private, so intimate. She wiggles her hips the tiniest fraction of an inch, trying to feel something. Gale grabs the back of her head and kisses her and his tongue in her mouth makes her want to groan."
Ick. Hate the detailed cliche image/sensation thing.
Katniss/Finnick pairing? Ugh.
But yeah...that was...amazing. *drooling*
Ahhh. You had me on the edge of my seat, and that's impressive.
Anyway.
*In awe.*
4/28/2013 c1 12marblesharp
Pretty depressingAU since it was so possible in canon. Still, beautiful writing and characterization.
12marblesharpPretty depressingAU since it was so possible in canon. Still, beautiful writing and characterization.