8/29/2020 c8 1Fictionalfoxy
"This is awesome, dude; we're normal to someone." Awe. That is surprisingly cute.
"This is awesome, dude; we're normal to someone." Awe. That is surprisingly cute.
12/2/2019 c37 Moltonstorm
I’m aware that this hasn’t been updated in over a year but I really do love this story and I hope it gets updated thank you
I’m aware that this hasn’t been updated in over a year but I really do love this story and I hope it gets updated thank you
4/25/2019 c36 51ViolaTheGlaceon
Oh, I forgot to mention that I saw the fan art of Evie and she’s just as I imagined. She’s so pretty!~
Oh, I forgot to mention that I saw the fan art of Evie and she’s just as I imagined. She’s so pretty!~
12/4/2018 c37 ViolaTheGlaceon
First of all, I want to say, screw the mistakes! This story is the epitome of awesomeness! You deserve all the likes, follows, reviews, and love for this story!
Second of all, I wonder if they'll meet up with the other dimensional turtles again? I mean the Evie of the Super Turtles dimension didn't exist, and it would be nice to see how Leonardo and Evelyn's relationship has progressed.
Finally, to the biggest mystery on my mind: Evie's past. I wonder what happened to her in the past? Is she purposely refusing to remember or has her mind repressed those certain memories? And what ever happened to her brother?
Anyways, I just wanted to mainly say that this is a wonderful story. Seriously, you deserve all the reviews. :D
First of all, I want to say, screw the mistakes! This story is the epitome of awesomeness! You deserve all the likes, follows, reviews, and love for this story!
Second of all, I wonder if they'll meet up with the other dimensional turtles again? I mean the Evie of the Super Turtles dimension didn't exist, and it would be nice to see how Leonardo and Evelyn's relationship has progressed.
Finally, to the biggest mystery on my mind: Evie's past. I wonder what happened to her in the past? Is she purposely refusing to remember or has her mind repressed those certain memories? And what ever happened to her brother?
Anyways, I just wanted to mainly say that this is a wonderful story. Seriously, you deserve all the reviews. :D
11/1/2018 c37 12Stegosaurus1412
I love this story! It’s not everyday I read stories with the ‘03 turtles, but this one’s got everything and I love how they’re all in character. I especially loved when all the other turtles want in on the text conversations and died laughing when Don and Mikey were evesdropping on a certain pair. Not to mention plenty of funny moments besides. “More like the nut job,” or “Yeesh, sounds like a chick version of Mikey..”
Oh, and Leo and Evie are really sweet together..
One thing that bothers me though.. how come after months of silence, the baddies suddenly return when Evie is thrown into the mix? Something doesn’t feel right..
I love this story! It’s not everyday I read stories with the ‘03 turtles, but this one’s got everything and I love how they’re all in character. I especially loved when all the other turtles want in on the text conversations and died laughing when Don and Mikey were evesdropping on a certain pair. Not to mention plenty of funny moments besides. “More like the nut job,” or “Yeesh, sounds like a chick version of Mikey..”
Oh, and Leo and Evie are really sweet together..
One thing that bothers me though.. how come after months of silence, the baddies suddenly return when Evie is thrown into the mix? Something doesn’t feel right..
9/27/2018 c35 Guest
Hi, I'm a new reader. Was fortunate enough to read this like a book all in one go. I look foreword to more. I hope this story brings you what you are looking for. :) we all have that one story that can do that for us. Some times the passion fades but it will always be a part of who we are. Even if you do not continue here do continue on. You will find your passion, that love, that missing peace in your world. They would be proud of you. But you need to be proud of your self to. My sense of spirit differs from most. I believe in a collective conciseness. One that we all can tap into. We all become apart of that and when some one leaves us, when we need it... except that we can reconnect, we can tap into all of there wisdom and love. My passion and compassion go out to you. Be Bright and strong and most of all be passionate. ~The Blackbird~
Hi, I'm a new reader. Was fortunate enough to read this like a book all in one go. I look foreword to more. I hope this story brings you what you are looking for. :) we all have that one story that can do that for us. Some times the passion fades but it will always be a part of who we are. Even if you do not continue here do continue on. You will find your passion, that love, that missing peace in your world. They would be proud of you. But you need to be proud of your self to. My sense of spirit differs from most. I believe in a collective conciseness. One that we all can tap into. We all become apart of that and when some one leaves us, when we need it... except that we can reconnect, we can tap into all of there wisdom and love. My passion and compassion go out to you. Be Bright and strong and most of all be passionate. ~The Blackbird~
9/25/2018 c36 5TheBeldam27
I absolutely love this chapter; by all means, take all the time u need for the next chapter, XD
I absolutely love this chapter; by all means, take all the time u need for the next chapter, XD
9/24/2018 c36 1boyishanimeweirdofreak
Okay so I don't know if I reviewed before but anyway, welcome back
I'm so sorry about your grandparents, I wish I could say more but I don't have anything else to say. But it's good that you've gone back to writing and I'm sure they would be proud too.
That being said, again, welcome back. You have no idea how much of a surprise it was when I got a notification that you actually updated. I'm so glad that you haven't abandoned it.
Egypt, your fic, is the best Leo/Oc fic I have ever read. Dude I can ignore the grammar and the fact that Don is older than Raph here because it's. Pure. Excellence. I've reread it more times than I can count and I still have yet to find a fic as masterful as this.
It's beautiful. Evie is perfect soft must protect. The boys are spot on and I almost thought you upped the rating a bit there. Just... It's really one of the best fics I've ever read. Honestly you could give a few original novels a run for their money.
I'm really sorry about your grand parents, truly I am.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Okay so I don't know if I reviewed before but anyway, welcome back
I'm so sorry about your grandparents, I wish I could say more but I don't have anything else to say. But it's good that you've gone back to writing and I'm sure they would be proud too.
That being said, again, welcome back. You have no idea how much of a surprise it was when I got a notification that you actually updated. I'm so glad that you haven't abandoned it.
Egypt, your fic, is the best Leo/Oc fic I have ever read. Dude I can ignore the grammar and the fact that Don is older than Raph here because it's. Pure. Excellence. I've reread it more times than I can count and I still have yet to find a fic as masterful as this.
It's beautiful. Evie is perfect soft must protect. The boys are spot on and I almost thought you upped the rating a bit there. Just... It's really one of the best fics I've ever read. Honestly you could give a few original novels a run for their money.
I'm really sorry about your grand parents, truly I am.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
9/15/2018 c35 5TheBeldam27
I BELIEVE IN YOU! DONT GIVE UP! DO IT FOR LEONARDO AND EVIE, YOUR WRITING IS GOD WORTHY!
I BELIEVE IN YOU! DONT GIVE UP! DO IT FOR LEONARDO AND EVIE, YOUR WRITING IS GOD WORTHY!
9/15/2018 c35 WOLFJADE28
Omg, welcome back! I was thrilled to see this in my email alerts and am looking forward to seeing you morenin future updates
Omg, welcome back! I was thrilled to see this in my email alerts and am looking forward to seeing you morenin future updates
9/14/2018 c35 Sarah
I am SORRY for your lost! I can’t express that enough!
I am SORRY for your lost! I can’t express that enough!