for The True Heir of Slytherin9/13 c11 James Lysander
SOMEHOW, I was sort of expecting the aurors to turn up, though not QUITE so soon, OR for
them to act so evilly.
SOMEHOW, I was sort of expecting the aurors to turn up, though not QUITE so soon, OR for
them to act so evilly.
9/13 c10 Lamorak Korving
I LOVED the masterful way Harry-or Lord Slytherin Potter not only got Sirius and Remus as
well as the Order of the Phoenix as allies, AND got rid of Umbridge. However, had it been
me, I'd have killed her by snapping her neck.
I LOVED the masterful way Harry-or Lord Slytherin Potter not only got Sirius and Remus as
well as the Order of the Phoenix as allies, AND got rid of Umbridge. However, had it been
me, I'd have killed her by snapping her neck.
9/13 c9 Lamorak Korving
Dumbledore, like Hermione Granger, your main problem is that you have no grey area. For
you and she both see the world in shades of black and white. Real life is not like that.
Everyone in the Order-bar Sirius and Remus, only see things as good or evil. In any case, Harry
is NOT dark. If you hadn't shunned him, you'd have known that he's defined his magic as grey.
You and Hermione, unlike Remus, have alienated Harry. And Ron? He's a selfish bastard who
only cares about himself. So long as HE gets what HE wants, he doesn't care about anyone else.
Nor does McGonagall care about her students, to be honest.
Dumbledore, like Hermione Granger, your main problem is that you have no grey area. For
you and she both see the world in shades of black and white. Real life is not like that.
Everyone in the Order-bar Sirius and Remus, only see things as good or evil. In any case, Harry
is NOT dark. If you hadn't shunned him, you'd have known that he's defined his magic as grey.
You and Hermione, unlike Remus, have alienated Harry. And Ron? He's a selfish bastard who
only cares about himself. So long as HE gets what HE wants, he doesn't care about anyone else.
Nor does McGonagall care about her students, to be honest.
9/13 c8 Lamorak Korving
I was somewhat disappointed to see Neville betray Harry. Hannah and Susan betraying
Harry I had expected, but NOT Neville Longbottom, as he normally remains loyal to Harry. I guess he
still equated Slytherin as being evil. But if ANY Hogwarts house is evil, it's0000 Gryffindor.
Consider the facts. 1: Before becoming headmaster, Dumbledore held the same dark wizard
views as Grindlewald. 2: James Potter and Sirius Black, by bullying Severus Snape, drove him and
Pettigrew to seek out Voldemort. 3: Molly Prewett, a Gryffindor student, USED A LOVE POTION ON
Arthur Weasley, and Harry considers that love potions are nothing less than rape drugs, and is
strongly opposed to them. 4: Peter Pettigrew, a Gryffindor, betrayed the Potters to the Dark
Lord Voldemort. 5: And finally, we have Ron and Hermione betraying Harry. Yes, Gryffindor, NOT
Slytherin, is the EVIL house. Dumbledore is a dark wizard pretending to be a good one.
I was somewhat disappointed to see Neville betray Harry. Hannah and Susan betraying
Harry I had expected, but NOT Neville Longbottom, as he normally remains loyal to Harry. I guess he
still equated Slytherin as being evil. But if ANY Hogwarts house is evil, it's0000 Gryffindor.
Consider the facts. 1: Before becoming headmaster, Dumbledore held the same dark wizard
views as Grindlewald. 2: James Potter and Sirius Black, by bullying Severus Snape, drove him and
Pettigrew to seek out Voldemort. 3: Molly Prewett, a Gryffindor student, USED A LOVE POTION ON
Arthur Weasley, and Harry considers that love potions are nothing less than rape drugs, and is
strongly opposed to them. 4: Peter Pettigrew, a Gryffindor, betrayed the Potters to the Dark
Lord Voldemort. 5: And finally, we have Ron and Hermione betraying Harry. Yes, Gryffindor, NOT
Slytherin, is the EVIL house. Dumbledore is a dark wizard pretending to be a good one.
9/13 c7 John Maitland
During World War II, I met people like Delores Umbridge-nasty, vile pieces of work that I
took great pleasure in putting in their place-like 6 feet under and DEAD! Karola Schmidt was
the worst of them. Both suffer from delusions of grandeur and excel at torture. I myself would
shoot Umbridge for free, just like I did with Schmidt. She screamed beautifully before she died.
As for Granger, I would train her to be my whore.
During World War II, I met people like Delores Umbridge-nasty, vile pieces of work that I
took great pleasure in putting in their place-like 6 feet under and DEAD! Karola Schmidt was
the worst of them. Both suffer from delusions of grandeur and excel at torture. I myself would
shoot Umbridge for free, just like I did with Schmidt. She screamed beautifully before she died.
As for Granger, I would train her to be my whore.
9/13 c6 Lamorak Korving
I was surprised that Ron and Hermione were being so damn stupid and idiotic. I guess they're
little more than Dumbledore's puppets, which is a pity. It's ALSO a pity that they can't see
that Dumbledore is manipulating them just like he did with Harry. I would have expected
Tracey Davis to want to join Harry, so it surprised me that she did not.
I was surprised that Ron and Hermione were being so damn stupid and idiotic. I guess they're
little more than Dumbledore's puppets, which is a pity. It's ALSO a pity that they can't see
that Dumbledore is manipulating them just like he did with Harry. I would have expected
Tracey Davis to want to join Harry, so it surprised me that she did not.
9/12 c3 Lamorak Korving
As an author of several completed if unpublished original detective novels-A Cadaver for
Christmas, A Body for Boxing Day, and Notoriety for New Year, I've thought for a long time that
Harry should just dump Hermione and Ron. Ron eats like a pig and is a selfish bastard who
only looks out for himself, and Hermione is so blind to Dumbledore's manipulations it isn't even
funny, it's tragic. I guess the smartest witch of the age isn't as smart as she thinks she is.
As an author of several completed if unpublished original detective novels-A Cadaver for
Christmas, A Body for Boxing Day, and Notoriety for New Year, I've thought for a long time that
Harry should just dump Hermione and Ron. Ron eats like a pig and is a selfish bastard who
only looks out for himself, and Hermione is so blind to Dumbledore's manipulations it isn't even
funny, it's tragic. I guess the smartest witch of the age isn't as smart as she thinks she is.
9/12 c1 Lamorak Korving
It kind of makes a hell of a lot of sense that Harry would be the TRUE Heir of Slytherin. Consider the
facts. 1: He speaks parseltongue. 2: He is cunning. He cleverly downplayed how damn smart he
was to keep Hermione, Molly, Ginny, Ron, Dumbledore, McGonagall, Umbridge and Fudge in the
dark. 3: He is definitely ambitious. 4: Harry is definitely more Slytherin than Gryffindor. Even the
Sorting Hat said he would do well in Slytherin. And then there's the way Harry got
Dumbledore to lower his guard. I mean, really, where's the very LAST PLACE you'd expect
to find a Slytherin? Gryffindor, of course. Riddle, on the other hand...he always WAS crazy, and
merely CLAIMED to be the Heir of Slytherin. He NEVER provided any proof.
It kind of makes a hell of a lot of sense that Harry would be the TRUE Heir of Slytherin. Consider the
facts. 1: He speaks parseltongue. 2: He is cunning. He cleverly downplayed how damn smart he
was to keep Hermione, Molly, Ginny, Ron, Dumbledore, McGonagall, Umbridge and Fudge in the
dark. 3: He is definitely ambitious. 4: Harry is definitely more Slytherin than Gryffindor. Even the
Sorting Hat said he would do well in Slytherin. And then there's the way Harry got
Dumbledore to lower his guard. I mean, really, where's the very LAST PLACE you'd expect
to find a Slytherin? Gryffindor, of course. Riddle, on the other hand...he always WAS crazy, and
merely CLAIMED to be the Heir of Slytherin. He NEVER provided any proof.
4/21 c19 rowenasheir
So as Voldy goes to protect his horcruxes, Harry has him followed by elf and snake?
So as Voldy goes to protect his horcruxes, Harry has him followed by elf and snake?
4/6 c19 Mikeblade
of course voldy died dumb ass what he did prevents his soul from passing on that's all his body can still die and be killed.
of course voldy died dumb ass what he did prevents his soul from passing on that's all his body can still die and be killed.
3/3 c18 Astramilitarum01
It's not bad overall but honestly to much politics, plot bs and drama for my taste.
I would have hoped for a more high powerd clever Harry but got one with a bunch of politics and rules that make sometimes no sense to me. But I think that mainly up to taste
It's not bad overall but honestly to much politics, plot bs and drama for my taste.
I would have hoped for a more high powerd clever Harry but got one with a bunch of politics and rules that make sometimes no sense to me. But I think that mainly up to taste
1/2 c6 steve
was going good then turned to 100% pure crap in just 1 chapter by adding draco to harrys side.
was going good then turned to 100% pure crap in just 1 chapter by adding draco to harrys side.