for The True Heir of Slytherin5/17 c7 Guest
O pior lixo de história que já li, sem pé nem cabeça, totalmente sem contexto, Harry aqui é basicamente outro Voldemort em relação aos companheiros de escola, já em se opor a cadela rosa é um saco de pancada, história inútil.
O pior lixo de história que já li, sem pé nem cabeça, totalmente sem contexto, Harry aqui é basicamente outro Voldemort em relação aos companheiros de escola, já em se opor a cadela rosa é um saco de pancada, história inútil.
1/14 c19 
2Darkshot99
Honestly this story is fantastic and a very enjoyable read, the only criticism I can give is when jumping from different locations some lineage to separate the sections, that way it is smoother to read and makes it more transparent to the reader that this somewhere else and not feel like I missed something, other then that it is a fantastic story and I am excited to see where it goes, have a good day and keep writing.
2Darkshot99Honestly this story is fantastic and a very enjoyable read, the only criticism I can give is when jumping from different locations some lineage to separate the sections, that way it is smoother to read and makes it more transparent to the reader that this somewhere else and not feel like I missed something, other then that it is a fantastic story and I am excited to see where it goes, have a good day and keep writing.
1/11 c19 Guest
Mundugus? I'm hoping it's Ron though
Mundugus? I'm hoping it's Ron though
1/7 c8 Djberneman
Acromantulas are known to be deathly afraid of basilisks. Why didn’t Harry just have Deus intimidate the colony?
Acromantulas are known to be deathly afraid of basilisks. Why didn’t Harry just have Deus intimidate the colony?
1/7 c7 Djberneman
I do not see a reason why he would need to kill the centaurs when he knows that they pose little threat to humans while they are busy with the acromantula hive? Also, why wouldn’t he at least try to negotiate with them considering how one of them actually saved his life in the past?
I do not see a reason why he would need to kill the centaurs when he knows that they pose little threat to humans while they are busy with the acromantula hive? Also, why wouldn’t he at least try to negotiate with them considering how one of them actually saved his life in the past?
9/13/2024 c11 James Lysander
SOMEHOW, I was sort of expecting the aurors to turn up, though not QUITE so soon, OR for
them to act so evilly.
SOMEHOW, I was sort of expecting the aurors to turn up, though not QUITE so soon, OR for
them to act so evilly.
9/13/2024 c10 Lamorak Korving
I LOVED the masterful way Harry-or Lord Slytherin Potter not only got Sirius and Remus as
well as the Order of the Phoenix as allies, AND got rid of Umbridge. However, had it been
me, I'd have killed her by snapping her neck.
I LOVED the masterful way Harry-or Lord Slytherin Potter not only got Sirius and Remus as
well as the Order of the Phoenix as allies, AND got rid of Umbridge. However, had it been
me, I'd have killed her by snapping her neck.
9/13/2024 c9 Lamorak Korving
Dumbledore, like Hermione Granger, your main problem is that you have no grey area. For
you and she both see the world in shades of black and white. Real life is not like that.
Everyone in the Order-bar Sirius and Remus, only see things as good or evil. In any case, Harry
is NOT dark. If you hadn't shunned him, you'd have known that he's defined his magic as grey.
You and Hermione, unlike Remus, have alienated Harry. And Ron? He's a selfish bastard who
only cares about himself. So long as HE gets what HE wants, he doesn't care about anyone else.
Nor does McGonagall care about her students, to be honest.
Dumbledore, like Hermione Granger, your main problem is that you have no grey area. For
you and she both see the world in shades of black and white. Real life is not like that.
Everyone in the Order-bar Sirius and Remus, only see things as good or evil. In any case, Harry
is NOT dark. If you hadn't shunned him, you'd have known that he's defined his magic as grey.
You and Hermione, unlike Remus, have alienated Harry. And Ron? He's a selfish bastard who
only cares about himself. So long as HE gets what HE wants, he doesn't care about anyone else.
Nor does McGonagall care about her students, to be honest.
9/13/2024 c8 Lamorak Korving
I was somewhat disappointed to see Neville betray Harry. Hannah and Susan betraying
Harry I had expected, but NOT Neville Longbottom, as he normally remains loyal to Harry. I guess he
still equated Slytherin as being evil. But if ANY Hogwarts house is evil, it's0000 Gryffindor.
Consider the facts. 1: Before becoming headmaster, Dumbledore held the same dark wizard
views as Grindlewald. 2: James Potter and Sirius Black, by bullying Severus Snape, drove him and
Pettigrew to seek out Voldemort. 3: Molly Prewett, a Gryffindor student, USED A LOVE POTION ON
Arthur Weasley, and Harry considers that love potions are nothing less than rape drugs, and is
strongly opposed to them. 4: Peter Pettigrew, a Gryffindor, betrayed the Potters to the Dark
Lord Voldemort. 5: And finally, we have Ron and Hermione betraying Harry. Yes, Gryffindor, NOT
Slytherin, is the EVIL house. Dumbledore is a dark wizard pretending to be a good one.
I was somewhat disappointed to see Neville betray Harry. Hannah and Susan betraying
Harry I had expected, but NOT Neville Longbottom, as he normally remains loyal to Harry. I guess he
still equated Slytherin as being evil. But if ANY Hogwarts house is evil, it's0000 Gryffindor.
Consider the facts. 1: Before becoming headmaster, Dumbledore held the same dark wizard
views as Grindlewald. 2: James Potter and Sirius Black, by bullying Severus Snape, drove him and
Pettigrew to seek out Voldemort. 3: Molly Prewett, a Gryffindor student, USED A LOVE POTION ON
Arthur Weasley, and Harry considers that love potions are nothing less than rape drugs, and is
strongly opposed to them. 4: Peter Pettigrew, a Gryffindor, betrayed the Potters to the Dark
Lord Voldemort. 5: And finally, we have Ron and Hermione betraying Harry. Yes, Gryffindor, NOT
Slytherin, is the EVIL house. Dumbledore is a dark wizard pretending to be a good one.
9/13/2024 c7 John Maitland
During World War II, I met people like Delores Umbridge-nasty, vile pieces of work that I
took great pleasure in putting in their place-like 6 feet under and DEAD! Karola Schmidt was
the worst of them. Both suffer from delusions of grandeur and excel at torture. I myself would
shoot Umbridge for free, just like I did with Schmidt. She screamed beautifully before she died.
As for Granger, I would train her to be my whore.
During World War II, I met people like Delores Umbridge-nasty, vile pieces of work that I
took great pleasure in putting in their place-like 6 feet under and DEAD! Karola Schmidt was
the worst of them. Both suffer from delusions of grandeur and excel at torture. I myself would
shoot Umbridge for free, just like I did with Schmidt. She screamed beautifully before she died.
As for Granger, I would train her to be my whore.