9/3/2023 c1 Guest
Decidedly unusual take on Harry being the Heir - different from the typical take - or mine which is based ON that take. I will follow it when see how it goes.
Decidedly unusual take on Harry being the Heir - different from the typical take - or mine which is based ON that take. I will follow it when see how it goes.
7/24/2023 c1 Guest
God this is bad
God this is bad
7/1/2023 c13 maria.marin.magdalena123
So so so amazing. I'd like it to be continued. Take your time! Stay safe!
So so so amazing. I'd like it to be continued. Take your time! Stay safe!
6/20/2023 c6 Calebros
so Harry is still an idiot? why else would he insult so many of his "followers" and donit openly?
he could haventold Astoria to look for people with the most potential or anything like that, but no, she needs to look for those who are unworthy.
so Harry is still an idiot? why else would he insult so many of his "followers" and donit openly?
he could haventold Astoria to look for people with the most potential or anything like that, but no, she needs to look for those who are unworthy.
6/5/2023 c1 flys36
I'm a little "iffy" about this chapter. I think everything happened way too fast.
He spends less than 1 day reading a book and then decides to do a bunch of rituals outside with no practice or ingredients.
Also, it seems like Harry turned into a Borg. After having 1 conversation with someone he has never talked to before he hust says, "I will comply."
I like the story. I just think it happened way to fast.
I'm a little "iffy" about this chapter. I think everything happened way too fast.
He spends less than 1 day reading a book and then decides to do a bunch of rituals outside with no practice or ingredients.
Also, it seems like Harry turned into a Borg. After having 1 conversation with someone he has never talked to before he hust says, "I will comply."
I like the story. I just think it happened way to fast.
5/23/2023 c12 ElementalMaster16
Very nice chapter! I had a great time rereading this story and I'm looking forward to seeing more soon.
Very nice chapter! I had a great time rereading this story and I'm looking forward to seeing more soon.
5/19/2023 c1 3Geovanni Luciano
Good explanation, but it felt rushed. I hope that the subsequent chapters don't rush the plot too much.
Good explanation, but it felt rushed. I hope that the subsequent chapters don't rush the plot too much.
5/19/2023 c1 Guest
well since it's cannon that it's not harry shit story
well since it's cannon that it's not harry shit story
5/19/2023 c1 Spider of Dreams
This is very... Rough. I advise getting a beta, or someone to read this an help out before posting.
This is very... Rough. I advise getting a beta, or someone to read this an help out before posting.
5/19/2023 c12 WhiteEagle1985
Thanks for the update to this story. I like the idea of both orders leaving Hogwarts so that the odds of it being attacked are reduced. I say reduced and not eliminated because evil knows no bounds.
Thanks for the update to this story. I like the idea of both orders leaving Hogwarts so that the odds of it being attacked are reduced. I say reduced and not eliminated because evil knows no bounds.