for Harry's Un-Birthday Gift1/5/2021 c3 Us.steele
As someone who just within the last few months nearly died to covid, and has spent the rest of the year recovering from the side effects, Luna's recovery at the end really touched a soft spot with me
As someone who just within the last few months nearly died to covid, and has spent the rest of the year recovering from the side effects, Luna's recovery at the end really touched a soft spot with me
10/1/2020 c3 
25stevem1
This is an unusual story. Well written and enjoyable. It is sad about Luna. She deserved much better.
25stevem1This is an unusual story. Well written and enjoyable. It is sad about Luna. She deserved much better.
9/8/2020 c3 odonnellzoo99
An unusually story with the main characters. I actually enjoyed Addison, the parents, and the changes at the school the most in this story.
Luna's improvement made for a happy ending.
An unusually story with the main characters. I actually enjoyed Addison, the parents, and the changes at the school the most in this story.
Luna's improvement made for a happy ending.
6/4/2020 c3 Hank1967
Excellent story! Really enjoyed it! I like the responsible adults. Much better than in canon. Enjoyed the zany twist with Luna becoming a pet. That was out there! While I'm not a Harry/Padma fan, it was well done and enjoyable. I also like how you brought the new headmaster to Hogwarts. Bout time someone responsible was in charge of the kids. The Witch Doctor stuff was great, too. I liked the dynamic between the headmaster and the group of friends. Also liked the dynamic between Harry and all of his friends as well as Hermione's and the Patil sisters' parents.
Excellent story! Really enjoyed it! I like the responsible adults. Much better than in canon. Enjoyed the zany twist with Luna becoming a pet. That was out there! While I'm not a Harry/Padma fan, it was well done and enjoyable. I also like how you brought the new headmaster to Hogwarts. Bout time someone responsible was in charge of the kids. The Witch Doctor stuff was great, too. I liked the dynamic between the headmaster and the group of friends. Also liked the dynamic between Harry and all of his friends as well as Hermione's and the Patil sisters' parents.
12/3/2019 c2 Matt
You apparently had no beta for this chapter. Headmaster Greengrass would have contacts in the Wizengamot, not contracts. And you continually spelled Hermione's name wrong. It's not spelled Hermoine.
You apparently had no beta for this chapter. Headmaster Greengrass would have contacts in the Wizengamot, not contracts. And you continually spelled Hermione's name wrong. It's not spelled Hermoine.
9/4/2019 c3 24VashonBeader
Amazing. I was heart broken for a time, but that was in the moment. Very nice, very well done. Thanks so much for writing and sharing!
24VashonBeaderAmazing. I was heart broken for a time, but that was in the moment. Very nice, very well done. Thanks so much for writing and sharing!
9/4/2019 c1 VashonBeader
Another great story! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
Another great story! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
8/20/2019 c3 LtKettch
Very different but enjoyable story. I understand that the intent was a short story, so character development would be short and abrupt. However, I wasn’t quite sure where the Padma pairing came from. It seemed like Hermione or Luna seemed more likely.
Luna’s characteristic as a dog was excellently done.
Thanks for sharing.
Very different but enjoyable story. I understand that the intent was a short story, so character development would be short and abrupt. However, I wasn’t quite sure where the Padma pairing came from. It seemed like Hermione or Luna seemed more likely.
Luna’s characteristic as a dog was excellently done.
Thanks for sharing.