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7/22/2013 c12 3minren
They witnessed the wonders of Sunny And oh poor Edd, he misses his mother :( Don't worry, two Luffy will save your mother, right author-san? .

So are we gonna see some action for the next chapter? :3 Onto the rescue of future Nami! :3 can't wait

And thanks for updating .
7/21/2013 c12 Guest
7/21/2013 c12 becket
been enjoying your work very much looking forward to more of it :)
7/20/2013 c12 Guest
7/20/2013 c12 247onepiece
really good. I cant wait for the next chapter.
7/20/2013 c12 6wolf191000
Woo! Hoo! now that's Excitement. I bet Luffy and Nami (Past-self's) weren't expecting that. I love the "COUP THE BURST!" it's amazing.

Well I'm glad "Past" Luffy and Nami made up in a sense and now finally we've reached the Island where "Future" Nami's held captive.

I hope they save her but I'm sure an awesome battle is gonna take place. I can't wait for the next chapter.
7/19/2013 c12 3the-writing-vampire
I am curious to see how the rescue of future Nami will go. I hope that you don't make it too easy on them. As far as how it didn't go the way I thought it would in my last review, I have to says that I am kind of glad for that fact. You kept things in character while surprising everyone, myself included. It also wasn't the massively predictable aspect of it.
7/19/2013 c12 10LunaMoonlight100
Awesoooooooome! Please hurry with updates.
7/19/2013 c12 12GammaDancer
I'm enjoying this and do I see sequel Spanish updated?
7/17/2013 c11 Guest
hahaha luffy saying sorry
7/17/2013 c10 Guest
interesting chapter
7/16/2013 c10 ErzaEscarleth
7/16/2013 c11 ErzaEscarleth
im just reading this, excelent chapter... im worried about young nami and luffy
7/16/2013 c11 kany
I love when Luffy apologized to the crew lollll
7/15/2013 c11 1kyia12
Aww. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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