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11/27/2017 c16 Na-chan
Bonjour très chère écrivain !
Je ne sais pas si tu vas lire ce que je vais écrire étant donné que ta fiction date un peu, mais peu importe j'ai besoin de retranscrire ce que j'ai ressenti en lisant ta fiction.. Je sais que tu es espagnole mais comme j'ai besoin de bien décrire ce que je ressens je préfère le dire dans ma langue natale en espérant que tu pourras le traduire.
Je crois bien que c'est l'histoire qui m'a le plus fasciné depuis que je me suis mise à lire .. Ton imagination est juste incroyable et tu retranscris à merveille les personnes de One piece, tellement que l'on pourrait s'imaginer que ça se produise réellement dans le manga ( tu m'as fait rêve c'est cruel haha )
J'ai aimé ton histoire et j'ai savouré chaque ligne avec l'angoisse de voir que je mapprochais de la fin .. Tu montres a quelle point le couple LuNa est merveilleux et j'ai remarqué aussi qu'en Espagne c'est lendroit ou se couple est le plus apprécié haha.
Merci d'écrire, je vais continuer sur ma lancée et lire le reste de tes fiction qui je suis sûre doivent t"être tout aussi magique a lire ! Je garde celle la de côté pour la relire encore et encore je pense que je ne m'en lasserai jamais ! Merci piur nous les fans du LuNa tu m'as vendu du rêve. A bientôt
5/10/2017 c16 Guest
3/29/2017 c16 2jovysanchez17
This was a great fic! I enjoyed reading it! I also love that both young and old Nami kissed their Luffy's counterpart and had had no hard feelings. This story had awesome buildup. Congrats and keep up the good work! :D
3/16/2017 c16 5CherCee
this is soooo cute!
9/1/2016 c16 Bakabaka
This fic is beyond great, this is the first time i got hyped by fanfic. After reading it, it makes me carved to watch one piece from beginning. The feeling of wonder overwhelm me, like how the crew end their journey, and live like the future you wrote.

I really love how you develop the character in the future, but i got to admit tho i almost cried when nami decide to be left behind. I hope you will continue writing a fic, i really love your style ;_;
8/25/2016 c8 Guest
Me gusta mucho tus historiad
8/9/2016 c9 9Chivan
im so in love with this story
6/23/2016 c16 Godschildtweety
Awesome story
5/13/2016 c13 48GojiraCipher
This is getting really intense!

Everything here so far, both Luffy's reaction to each other and their fights, Nami and Pirate King Luffy's talk about their future, and this exciting battle and cliffhanger is perfect!
5/10/2016 c4 GojiraCipher
Oh things are looking intense!

You're doing really well. The buildup was perfect and natural, everyone is in character, and the thought of Edd's backstory was very depressing.
5/10/2016 c2 GojiraCipher
Sanji, do you actually think Luffy would even know how to make a child. Just make sure everyone is quick on their feet the moment he asks.

Just like your comic, this is going great! Now to see how this all turns out! Only with more effort since there are no pictures.
5/4/2016 c16 kmikaberidze26
Wow just amazing story, loved it. I enjoyed it till the very last chapter! Thank you so much for putting so much effort in this wonderful story!
3/18/2016 c16 saneebs
i'm just done reading this story, and i crying a lot imagine the future of LuNa TToTT OMGGG THIS GREAT STORY .
3/16/2016 c15 1PurpleKetloom
Aaaaand once again, I'm impressed! Two different stories in one day? Yes PLEASE. 3
3/4/2016 c16 18bandgirlz
This was a very fun read; I definitely enjoyed it! It's very well done, too, for a translation. I really want to see what Pirate King Luffy looks like, by the way...
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