
1/26/2014 c3
5puddingtalk
Whoa. Really great writing, and an awesome twist on Beauty and the Beast. I love the setting especially. Rome is always a fascinating subject. Great work :D

Whoa. Really great writing, and an awesome twist on Beauty and the Beast. I love the setting especially. Rome is always a fascinating subject. Great work :D
1/14/2014 c2
1Sienna246
First time I have ever read a piece of fanfiction including the story keepers!
Sounds interesting, I'm off to the next chapter...

First time I have ever read a piece of fanfiction including the story keepers!
Sounds interesting, I'm off to the next chapter...
7/4/2013 c21 Lil Snowbird
Nihilus is getting on my last nerve. If I could, I would give him a shiner right now.
Nihilus is getting on my last nerve. If I could, I would give him a shiner right now.
7/4/2013 c20 ADP
I have a bad feeling about this so called premonition...
I have a bad feeling about this so called premonition...
7/4/2013 c19 ADP
Well, the good news is the Briton beauty, the Roman beast, and their friends are heading to Shem-Hadar. The bad news is someone might be out to get them!
Well, the good news is the Briton beauty, the Roman beast, and their friends are heading to Shem-Hadar. The bad news is someone might be out to get them!
7/4/2013 c18 lil snowbird
Oh dear. It looks as it something big is about to happen!
Oh dear. It looks as it something big is about to happen!
7/4/2013 c18 ADP
Oh, dear! They gotta save Ben. And let's hope Marius will arrive in time to save them all!
Oh, dear! They gotta save Ben. And let's hope Marius will arrive in time to save them all!
6/21/2013 c17 Lil Snowbird
He's coming to the rescue. I'm so glad.
He's coming to the rescue. I'm so glad.
6/21/2013 c17 ADP
What are they gonna do now? Will they get to Rhoswen, Ben, and Moran in time?
What are they gonna do now? Will they get to Rhoswen, Ben, and Moran in time?
6/16/2013 c16 ADP
What are they going to do? They must escape the Romans and get back to Marius before it's too late!
What are they going to do? They must escape the Romans and get back to Marius before it's too late!
6/16/2013 c16 Lil Snowbird
Uh-oh. This can't be good. In a noble attempt to protect Marius and her Christian friends, Rhoswen might end up put to death.
Uh-oh. This can't be good. In a noble attempt to protect Marius and her Christian friends, Rhoswen might end up put to death.
6/16/2013 c15 ADP
I wonder how Moran reacts to his daughter's story, and they get to escape.
I wonder how Moran reacts to his daughter's story, and they get to escape.
6/16/2013 c15 Lil Snowbird
Very moving to see good people stand up for what they believe in.
Very moving to see good people stand up for what they believe in.
6/16/2013 c14 Lil Snowbird
Yikes! Things are getting intense.
Yikes! Things are getting intense.
6/16/2013 c14 ADP
I hope Rhoswen, Ben, Helena and the children will get to Marius in time.
I hope Rhoswen, Ben, Helena and the children will get to Marius in time.