for Faith5/30/2013 c4 
1Oluhasuu
love you are doing the movie with jack "blind"! though hope all stick to it 'cause some parts that don't involve of jack and the movie just...but that's my opinion
1Oluhasuulove you are doing the movie with jack "blind"! though hope all stick to it 'cause some parts that don't involve of jack and the movie just...but that's my opinion
5/28/2013 c4 mwah ha ha
Oooh...this is so interesting! Please oh please oh pleeeeeeease say you'll update soon! I can just see Bunny getting frustrated about not getting Jack's attention the way he does in the movie and just following him with the yetis in tow to his pond where they finally manage to kidnap him...and then Jack freaking out on the landing...and him not having a clue where he is until North starts introducing him to everyone, and then just going with it...until North starts up the fanfare and the frantic wind demonstrates absolutely PERFECT timing as it busts through the windows to get to Jack...
Of course your version's probably gonna be different, but I'm looking forward to it all the same! (Or if you have writer's block, please, feel free to be inspired!)
Oooh...this is so interesting! Please oh please oh pleeeeeeease say you'll update soon! I can just see Bunny getting frustrated about not getting Jack's attention the way he does in the movie and just following him with the yetis in tow to his pond where they finally manage to kidnap him...and then Jack freaking out on the landing...and him not having a clue where he is until North starts introducing him to everyone, and then just going with it...until North starts up the fanfare and the frantic wind demonstrates absolutely PERFECT timing as it busts through the windows to get to Jack...
Of course your version's probably gonna be different, but I'm looking forward to it all the same! (Or if you have writer's block, please, feel free to be inspired!)
5/22/2013 c4 19micky21
Thanx it was so nice to read more, i love how you put it in and use your own way of seeing things. but still it is good to hear you answered my request much thanx.
love to hear more friend...bye
19micky21Thanx it was so nice to read more, i love how you put it in and use your own way of seeing things. but still it is good to hear you answered my request much thanx.
love to hear more friend...bye
5/18/2013 c4 11pink45
You were right that was short. I feel so sorry for Jack though. The scene were he is looking in the window and listening and cannot see is so sad. Are the other guardians going to be in the next chapter ? I wonder how they will react to Jack's blindness. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
You were right that was short. I feel so sorry for Jack though. The scene were he is looking in the window and listening and cannot see is so sad. Are the other guardians going to be in the next chapter ? I wonder how they will react to Jack's blindness. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
5/18/2013 c4 21SerenityFrogLuvr3
I'm actually kind of really enjoying this. I like tha you're keeping true to the movie and I can't wait to see where you take it :)
21SerenityFrogLuvr3I'm actually kind of really enjoying this. I like tha you're keeping true to the movie and I can't wait to see where you take it :)
5/17/2013 c4 13LadyLombax
Short chapter do get longer. Next thing you'll know, you're pushing nearly 2500 words per chapter. It just comes once you get into the flow. Most of mine were short until I found my groove.
Once again, a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
13LadyLombaxShort chapter do get longer. Next thing you'll know, you're pushing nearly 2500 words per chapter. It just comes once you get into the flow. Most of mine were short until I found my groove.
Once again, a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
5/11/2013 c3 11pink45
Great chapter. I loved it. So the guardians are going to appear in the next chapter right? You are now following the movie. I feel sorry for jack though. Keep up the great work. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Great chapter. I loved it. So the guardians are going to appear in the next chapter right? You are now following the movie. I feel sorry for jack though. Keep up the great work. Can't wait till the next chapter.
5/11/2013 c2 11pink45
So jack is blind? That is a really interesting idea I can't wait for the next chapter
So jack is blind? That is a really interesting idea I can't wait for the next chapter