for Caught in the Web4/30/2013 c1 Am I Somebody
Great work. A few grammar errors. But nothing to bad. Can't wait for more. Later bro.
TASF out.
Great work. A few grammar errors. But nothing to bad. Can't wait for more. Later bro.
TASF out.
4/30/2013 c1 The New Creed
this is good and i encourage you to keep it up.
the dc pairing i want to see the most is barbara gordon and donna troy
marvel is jessica drew and jean grey
this is good and i encourage you to keep it up.
the dc pairing i want to see the most is barbara gordon and donna troy
marvel is jessica drew and jean grey
4/30/2013 c1 
22aspiringactor
I like it. Both in terms of your writing style & choosing an out-of-the-box girl for him to have a 'relationship' with. I can defanitely see Spidey helping her in any way possible. If you do a follow up chapter, Aunt May's reaction would be nice to see.
If you are open to suggestions, I'd like to See Batgirl (he could show up at wayne manor/the batcave for a date and meet a certain brooding vigilante) Wonder Woman, Supergirl/Powergirl from DC.
From Marvel: Shadowcat, Ms Marvel and Spider-woman (not ultimate!)
22aspiringactorI like it. Both in terms of your writing style & choosing an out-of-the-box girl for him to have a 'relationship' with. I can defanitely see Spidey helping her in any way possible. If you do a follow up chapter, Aunt May's reaction would be nice to see.
If you are open to suggestions, I'd like to See Batgirl (he could show up at wayne manor/the batcave for a date and meet a certain brooding vigilante) Wonder Woman, Supergirl/Powergirl from DC.
From Marvel: Shadowcat, Ms Marvel and Spider-woman (not ultimate!)
4/30/2013 c1 37CMR Rosa
I think this is a good first chapter, I like you take on Starfire and Spider-Man first meeting
37CMR RosaI think this is a good first chapter, I like you take on Starfire and Spider-Man first meeting
4/30/2013 c1 93Captain Omnitron
LOVED THIS! Especially Starfire! Gotta say, I love anything where she's based on her Teen Titans show version. All others don't hold a candle to that version of her when it comes to me
93Captain OmnitronLOVED THIS! Especially Starfire! Gotta say, I love anything where she's based on her Teen Titans show version. All others don't hold a candle to that version of her when it comes to me