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Never thought I'd see the day where Spiderman meets Ellie from Last Of Us.
17WwEpsilonwWNever thought I'd see the day where Spiderman meets Ellie from Last Of Us.
3/12/2022 c50 14Batguy01
Loved this chapter (and this fic in general). Hope you continue this fic one day, as well as a sequel to this one-shot.
Anyway, I'm a really HUGE Doctor Who fan and top 5 favorite Doctors are 11, 10, 4, 2, and 3.
For the Doctor's companion that I would have Spidey date next, well for each Doctor's companions:
!: Susan, Vicki, and Dodo.
2: Polly, Victoria, and Zoe.
3: Liz and Jo.
4: Sarah Jane, Leela, and both versions of Romana.
5: Nyssa, Tegan, and Erimem (from the Expanded Universe).
6: Peri, Flip (from the Expanded Universe), and Constance (from the Expanded Universe also).
7:Mel, Ace, and Benny (from the EU as well).
8: Sam, Charley, Izzy, and Lucie (all from the EU as well).
9: Rose.
10: Martha, Donna, and Gabby (also from the EU).
12: Clara
13: Yaz and 13 herself.
Hope you like my suggestions for which Doctor Who character that Peter Parker should be paired with next.
Tofa and keep up the good work.
14Batguy01Loved this chapter (and this fic in general). Hope you continue this fic one day, as well as a sequel to this one-shot.
Anyway, I'm a really HUGE Doctor Who fan and top 5 favorite Doctors are 11, 10, 4, 2, and 3.
For the Doctor's companion that I would have Spidey date next, well for each Doctor's companions:
!: Susan, Vicki, and Dodo.
2: Polly, Victoria, and Zoe.
3: Liz and Jo.
4: Sarah Jane, Leela, and both versions of Romana.
5: Nyssa, Tegan, and Erimem (from the Expanded Universe).
6: Peri, Flip (from the Expanded Universe), and Constance (from the Expanded Universe also).
7:Mel, Ace, and Benny (from the EU as well).
8: Sam, Charley, Izzy, and Lucie (all from the EU as well).
9: Rose.
10: Martha, Donna, and Gabby (also from the EU).
12: Clara
13: Yaz and 13 herself.
Hope you like my suggestions for which Doctor Who character that Peter Parker should be paired with next.
Tofa and keep up the good work.
1/28/2022 c14 Guest
Hey this is a pretty good collection if I do say so. My only complaint is that upon rereading you use the words 'smirk' '' smug' in some variation far too often. Like every three sentences there's some variation of the above words and it's really annoying once you start to consciously notice it. So to better your writing you could reduce the repetition of words. Also I feel most of these depict spidey as too goofy and jokey, like the guy can't take anything seriously. Pre OMD, this wasn't true as you know through 30 years of character development Peter had evolved into a more mature person, but immediate post OMD Peter was annoying as hell. I HATE JOE QUESADA SO MUCH
Hey this is a pretty good collection if I do say so. My only complaint is that upon rereading you use the words 'smirk' '' smug' in some variation far too often. Like every three sentences there's some variation of the above words and it's really annoying once you start to consciously notice it. So to better your writing you could reduce the repetition of words. Also I feel most of these depict spidey as too goofy and jokey, like the guy can't take anything seriously. Pre OMD, this wasn't true as you know through 30 years of character development Peter had evolved into a more mature person, but immediate post OMD Peter was annoying as hell. I HATE JOE QUESADA SO MUCH
12/11/2021 c66 29Miraculous Psychic Hero 100
I’ve been a huge fan of this story for years however I have never gotten around to reading it in its entirety sadly. I know it’s been nearly five years now since you updated the fic. I hope you’re okay especially with everything that’s been happening in the last couple years.
In case, you’re still on here, I got to the Moka chapter and saw you talking about the RosarioVampire anime and how it’s cheesy and everything. I agree with you. They took the series and kind of did their own thing in the second season while ramping up the fanservice in the entire series. Honestly, I recommend reading the manga version of the series. The story is told in a much better fashion, has less fanservice, and the plot is much more serious with a lot more going on than the anime shows.
Anyway, even if you don’t continue this, I hope you’re doing okay. Hope to see you again
29Miraculous Psychic Hero 100I’ve been a huge fan of this story for years however I have never gotten around to reading it in its entirety sadly. I know it’s been nearly five years now since you updated the fic. I hope you’re okay especially with everything that’s been happening in the last couple years.
In case, you’re still on here, I got to the Moka chapter and saw you talking about the RosarioVampire anime and how it’s cheesy and everything. I agree with you. They took the series and kind of did their own thing in the second season while ramping up the fanservice in the entire series. Honestly, I recommend reading the manga version of the series. The story is told in a much better fashion, has less fanservice, and the plot is much more serious with a lot more going on than the anime shows.
Anyway, even if you don’t continue this, I hope you’re doing okay. Hope to see you again
9/21/2021 c1 Guest
Wish you would continue this
Wish you would continue this