7/26/2014 c6 1Tricksters Anarchy
(0_0) Totally did not expect it to be THIS dang good, no offense, but I've read some really crappy HPxDBZ Xovers and my expectations eventually dropped. In your case though, this is head and shoulders above 98% of them, and one of my favorites!
-Ezra
(0_0) Totally did not expect it to be THIS dang good, no offense, but I've read some really crappy HPxDBZ Xovers and my expectations eventually dropped. In your case though, this is head and shoulders above 98% of them, and one of my favorites!
-Ezra
6/3/2014 c6 Guest
Interesting. Though I have noticed some spelling issues, mostly with the latin used for the spells. Priori Incantatum, Avada Kedavra, Patronus, Expelliarmus just to name a few. Also it's Neville and Fawkes. I know that spell check often doesn't recognize those particular words, having my own HP fics and thought you might like to be informed. Very Interesting story. Admittedly I'm more into Slash, despite being christian myself, but this is still interesting. It gives a new meaning to the term blood-bonded, that's for sure. Tights? Huh. Learn something new every day. And I thought I knew most of the stuff there was to know about DBZ. Hope YOu'll update soon.
Ja
Sinopa (I am too lazy and tired to sign in as it's after 4am where I live, just look for the fic Bandit Killer Strikes Back and you'll find me if you want to reply to this.)
Interesting. Though I have noticed some spelling issues, mostly with the latin used for the spells. Priori Incantatum, Avada Kedavra, Patronus, Expelliarmus just to name a few. Also it's Neville and Fawkes. I know that spell check often doesn't recognize those particular words, having my own HP fics and thought you might like to be informed. Very Interesting story. Admittedly I'm more into Slash, despite being christian myself, but this is still interesting. It gives a new meaning to the term blood-bonded, that's for sure. Tights? Huh. Learn something new every day. And I thought I knew most of the stuff there was to know about DBZ. Hope YOu'll update soon.
Ja
Sinopa (I am too lazy and tired to sign in as it's after 4am where I live, just look for the fic Bandit Killer Strikes Back and you'll find me if you want to reply to this.)
4/16/2014 c5 Guest
Love it! Please write more SOON
Love it! Please write more SOON
1/1/2014 c4 1363797
MUFFIN BUTTON!
I really like this story, I have noticed a few spelling mistakes, the main ones being Neville and Fawkes.
I'm no Beta (English at school wasn't my strong point), but I have been called out a few times for being a member of the grammar police before. I could have a look before you post, but I think that list some good word processors that have spell check.
Please keep on typing.
MUFFIN BUTTON!
I really like this story, I have noticed a few spelling mistakes, the main ones being Neville and Fawkes.
I'm no Beta (English at school wasn't my strong point), but I have been called out a few times for being a member of the grammar police before. I could have a look before you post, but I think that list some good word processors that have spell check.
Please keep on typing.
12/29/2013 c2 Dr. 18
Why? Why would you make Dumbledore a dick-head?
Why? Why would you make Dumbledore a dick-head?
7/29/2013 c2 3Shinningstar1998
this is a good story sometimes i wonder how people come up with these brilliant stories
this is a good story sometimes i wonder how people come up with these brilliant stories
7/25/2013 c2 10Gaea's Scion
I know you'll start hearing this alot, but let me be the first to say; Of all people, it had to be draco? why couldnt it be Neville? or Hermionie? or anyone else thats not Draco or Ron? I do hope you bash snape and Molly along with some others though but i relly do need an answer to my questions.
I know you'll start hearing this alot, but let me be the first to say; Of all people, it had to be draco? why couldnt it be Neville? or Hermionie? or anyone else thats not Draco or Ron? I do hope you bash snape and Molly along with some others though but i relly do need an answer to my questions.
6/28/2013 c1 Guest
Interesting story I can wait to read more hope you continue with his
Interesting story I can wait to read more hope you continue with his