
7/10/2013 c14 MountainDewMe
This is good, but where's the smut? I want to see Bolt and Maybelle getting it on!
This is good, but where's the smut? I want to see Bolt and Maybelle getting it on!
7/4/2013 c14 Multi Burst
Sorry, I cant hear writing.
Great 14 chapters! Hope to eventually see a new chapter! Gonna follow it to know when it is un paused with a new chapter released :)
Sorry, I cant hear writing.
Great 14 chapters! Hope to eventually see a new chapter! Gonna follow it to know when it is un paused with a new chapter released :)
6/29/2013 c14
4Brover 9000
This is Brover 9000 man. I love your story dude. PlEASE READ THIS: I am working on a fanfic about Bolt. In my story, Bolt turns into a human. It will be an awesome story bro. You got to read this.

This is Brover 9000 man. I love your story dude. PlEASE READ THIS: I am working on a fanfic about Bolt. In my story, Bolt turns into a human. It will be an awesome story bro. You got to read this.
6/25/2013 c14
9Lily Shine
Wow man the way you pulled the readers tails with Maybelles condition. I enjoyed this, and you better finish writing it. Ya Hear?!

Wow man the way you pulled the readers tails with Maybelles condition. I enjoyed this, and you better finish writing it. Ya Hear?!
6/23/2013 c14 Guest
Oh thank goodness that Maybelle is alive. I don't want Maybelle to die. This is a totally infinitive cool story mon. You got to make more dude. Brover 9000 love this man.
Oh thank goodness that Maybelle is alive. I don't want Maybelle to die. This is a totally infinitive cool story mon. You got to make more dude. Brover 9000 love this man.
6/17/2013 c9 Rtezy
That Was A Good one ... Nothing to Complaining , except for those Space . :)
Your Story getting more interesting ...
That Was A Good one ... Nothing to Complaining , except for those Space . :)
Your Story getting more interesting ...
6/17/2013 c4 Rtezy
Good One , i've Read Four Chapter in a row . here's my REVIEW for those 4 Chapter .
Okay , to be honest . you make those chapter too short and you should work on the Space between one line and another . BUT IF YOU ASK ME THE OVERALL RATING , I WOULD GO FOR 8.5 From 10 , for the Story and Awesome Cliffhanger , just keep up your good work ...
Good One , i've Read Four Chapter in a row . here's my REVIEW for those 4 Chapter .
Okay , to be honest . you make those chapter too short and you should work on the Space between one line and another . BUT IF YOU ASK ME THE OVERALL RATING , I WOULD GO FOR 8.5 From 10 , for the Story and Awesome Cliffhanger , just keep up your good work ...
6/17/2013 c13
9Lily Shine
These chapters are not that short. My favorite part of this chapter was when Bolt realized that he had to pee, Like really bad. Keep up the great work man.

These chapters are not that short. My favorite part of this chapter was when Bolt realized that he had to pee, Like really bad. Keep up the great work man.
6/16/2013 c13 Guest
DON'T MAKE HER DIE MAN. I WILL CRY IF YOU DO. BOLT HAVE FOUND LOVE MAN. DON'T DO THIS! NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!
DON'T MAKE HER DIE MAN. I WILL CRY IF YOU DO. BOLT HAVE FOUND LOVE MAN. DON'T DO THIS! NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!
6/14/2013 c12
4Brover 9000
When are you going to make more on this dude. Don't leave a story like this hanging man. I would love to see more on this. I saw also the picture on fanart, and it was AWESOME with them. Your friend is totally cool and it a stud. Anyway, pppplllllleeeeeaaaasssssseeee make more in these chapters man.

When are you going to make more on this dude. Don't leave a story like this hanging man. I would love to see more on this. I saw also the picture on fanart, and it was AWESOME with them. Your friend is totally cool and it a stud. Anyway, pppplllllleeeeeaaaasssssseeee make more in these chapters man.
6/2/2013 c12
9Lily Shine
Great chapter bro. What are you stuck on and did you check the email i sent you?

Great chapter bro. What are you stuck on and did you check the email i sent you?