
6/1/2013 c1
45dimitrisgirl18
How cute! Ron and Ginny siblingfics are literally adorable. First of all, I love weddings, and I loved your "something borrowed, something blue" reference! :) Both were very in-character and very enjoyable to read.
The only criticism I have is that in the very beginning, there were a few awkward fragments. Alas, I understand you wrote it for One Hour Pairing! (Gamma's beautiful, isn't she?) You wrote this /amazingly/ for an hour and I'm in so much love with this. The rose pendant was awesome, the Harry comment was squee, and you are perfection. Well done!
Allie

How cute! Ron and Ginny siblingfics are literally adorable. First of all, I love weddings, and I loved your "something borrowed, something blue" reference! :) Both were very in-character and very enjoyable to read.
The only criticism I have is that in the very beginning, there were a few awkward fragments. Alas, I understand you wrote it for One Hour Pairing! (Gamma's beautiful, isn't she?) You wrote this /amazingly/ for an hour and I'm in so much love with this. The rose pendant was awesome, the Harry comment was squee, and you are perfection. Well done!
Allie
5/22/2013 c1 BooksAreBetterThanScreens
How sweet! I've never had sibligs so I can't understand that bond very well, but this was touching and appropriate. It was also nice to see Ron not put his foot in his mouth for once!
How sweet! I've never had sibligs so I can't understand that bond very well, but this was touching and appropriate. It was also nice to see Ron not put his foot in his mouth for once!
5/6/2013 c1
72Schermionie
Aw! I really like this - it's great to see a friendly sibling moment between Ron and Ginny, not to mention one where they both read so in-character. You manage to show their qualities - Ginny's confidence, Ron's protectiveness and insecurity - without exaggerating them, making for a very sweet, equanimous moment. The fond anecdotes of their childhood bring a sense of shared history and nostalgia between them, strengthening their bond and, as Blackrose Malfoy said, illustrating how far they've come since their childhoods. I adore the Snitch game story, and Arthur stopping them playing because they might work it out before him! I can totally imagine Ron and Ginny playing with each other as they're so close in age. :)
I like the 'before the wedding' setting, too. It's hardly a fresh setting, but it's a nice one nonetheless, especially with the old Muggle saying (I'm curious, what is it supposed to be?) and the gift that Ron and Lavender arranged for Ginny. Bilius's watch is a family heirloom, and re-working it into a pendant would have surely taken a lot of work. '"It's really lovely, Ron."' is true indeed.
Thanks for sharing this light-hearted story! I'm so impressed you wrote this in an hour, typos and all. The description paints a vivid enough picture of the scene, and the dialogue and characterisation are spot on, too.
My favourite line is this one: 'A private, knowing smile came across Ron's face.' There's just something adorable about it.
This banter's good, too: '"Yeah, the things you do for your favourite sister..." The tips of his ears reddened as he brushed off the compliment.
'"I'm your only sister, so it doesn't count!" she countered in amusement.'
Ron's reddening ears, and that good old 'favourite sibling' ploy. I love it!

Aw! I really like this - it's great to see a friendly sibling moment between Ron and Ginny, not to mention one where they both read so in-character. You manage to show their qualities - Ginny's confidence, Ron's protectiveness and insecurity - without exaggerating them, making for a very sweet, equanimous moment. The fond anecdotes of their childhood bring a sense of shared history and nostalgia between them, strengthening their bond and, as Blackrose Malfoy said, illustrating how far they've come since their childhoods. I adore the Snitch game story, and Arthur stopping them playing because they might work it out before him! I can totally imagine Ron and Ginny playing with each other as they're so close in age. :)
I like the 'before the wedding' setting, too. It's hardly a fresh setting, but it's a nice one nonetheless, especially with the old Muggle saying (I'm curious, what is it supposed to be?) and the gift that Ron and Lavender arranged for Ginny. Bilius's watch is a family heirloom, and re-working it into a pendant would have surely taken a lot of work. '"It's really lovely, Ron."' is true indeed.
Thanks for sharing this light-hearted story! I'm so impressed you wrote this in an hour, typos and all. The description paints a vivid enough picture of the scene, and the dialogue and characterisation are spot on, too.
My favourite line is this one: 'A private, knowing smile came across Ron's face.' There's just something adorable about it.
This banter's good, too: '"Yeah, the things you do for your favourite sister..." The tips of his ears reddened as he brushed off the compliment.
'"I'm your only sister, so it doesn't count!" she countered in amusement.'
Ron's reddening ears, and that good old 'favourite sibling' ploy. I love it!
5/5/2013 c1 AccountWillNoLongerBeActive
What a sweet, wonderful family fic. I love it!
Ron and Ginny both seemed to be very in character. I love how they talked about all the games they used to play as children. It was such a good way to make the fic lighthearted and nostalgic while still illustrating how much has changed in their lives since their childhood. Very well done.
I have to say my favorite part was this: "Oh yeah, I remembered the main reason I came here," he said digging in his pocket. "Hermione was explaining to me about a muggle tradition during weddings something blue, new, borrowed, and... used?"
That line definitely made me laugh. I like how Ron almost gets the muggle tradition right, but not quite. It reminded me of how he called the telephone the fellytone in the books. :)
I think you did a really good job on SPaG, especially considering you wrote this in one hour! I only found a couple errors, which were very minor. One was this: Ron stopped at the door as she rushed up to him and threw her arms around he waist.
This was simply fantastic. One of the best sibling stories I've ever read. Keep up the great work! :)
What a sweet, wonderful family fic. I love it!
Ron and Ginny both seemed to be very in character. I love how they talked about all the games they used to play as children. It was such a good way to make the fic lighthearted and nostalgic while still illustrating how much has changed in their lives since their childhood. Very well done.
I have to say my favorite part was this: "Oh yeah, I remembered the main reason I came here," he said digging in his pocket. "Hermione was explaining to me about a muggle tradition during weddings something blue, new, borrowed, and... used?"
That line definitely made me laugh. I like how Ron almost gets the muggle tradition right, but not quite. It reminded me of how he called the telephone the fellytone in the books. :)
I think you did a really good job on SPaG, especially considering you wrote this in one hour! I only found a couple errors, which were very minor. One was this: Ron stopped at the door as she rushed up to him and threw her arms around he waist.
This was simply fantastic. One of the best sibling stories I've ever read. Keep up the great work! :)
5/4/2013 c1
47Oriondruid
Sweet, well written and for once Ron is being a good brother and being nice to Ginny, not trying to tease her.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).

Sweet, well written and for once Ron is being a good brother and being nice to Ginny, not trying to tease her.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).