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5/5/2018 c58 25Pepe's Red-Eyed Cousin
Dawn is a really nice woman. I hope that Sierra gets a chance to open up to her, and I hope that Dawn will be understanding.

Mal’s story was fantastic and eye-opening. It must really such to be forced to share an apartment with somebody you don’t love just because your other personality loves her, and the only other people you can turn to are either drug dealers or somebody like Izzy. I liked how Mal, Duncan and Trent all met up. Sucks for Paul, but he is a liar, and a thief. I have no sympathy for him. Zoey is definitely too nice for her own good. Same goes for Duncan. Beth is a headcase.

Anyway, brilliant chapter and it’s good that you’re writing again!
5/5/2018 c58 5TheBlueAzuru
Oh my God! I legitimately gasped when I got the alert. I seriously did not expect this story to ever be continued. I'm so glad it has been. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your great content xxx
5/5/2018 c58 4Hermione Hawthorne
Well done!
5/4/2018 c58 nateo
lmao! it has been 3 years and i barely remember this story. i wish i had to reread it, but graduating does stuff to ya. thanks for updating! keep it up for your many other readers! i know when you were a weekly (semi weekly? i cant remember) author i was in love with your writing
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5/4/2018 c58 493UltimateWarriorFan4Ever
Wow, I can possibly tell that Zoey is probably more comfortable with Mike instead of Mal. If Zoey had to be stuck with Mal, I can assume it wouldn't last very long between them both.

BTW, I laughed at the barista's name. Judgy McBitch sounds like it could win an award for being crowned the "Best Name Ever".

Nice to see you back. Can't wait to see what you come up next. ;D
10/6/2017 c57 VIPGuest
Hey so I really really liked the direction of the story up until Chef died. I just felt like the funeral drunken party thing was really weird and out of place, and it didn't add much to the plot. Also you kept teasing that something big was going to happen from Mal and Izzy but it never did :(
Sorry this isn't a flame, I really like your works, but i just feel like this story which had so much going for it lost its structure half way through making it fall apart :/
7/19/2016 c57 Guest
okay this story is stupid you should end it after the meet & greet.
12/17/2015 c57 a mother fuking
I cant believe that you ar writing this, its getting sooooooo good. AND THIS IS JUST THE CALM BEFORE THE STORM?! ohhhhh my Gooooddddd. you are on chapter mother fuking 57. and 207,000 words?! are you /trying/ to surpass the mario x wario fan fiction for longest piece of art. ... bbby writer, just keep writing your tragedy and make the readers happy, like myself. ;;;;;)))))))
12/5/2015 c57 SargentEpsilon
Well, that was interesting. Nice to see things work out for LeShawna, Owen, and Justin.
12/5/2015 c57 Zoey101fan3600
Awesome chapter as usual:)
7/7/2015 c56 Idk
Can you please put some coderra stuff in the next episode? ️
6/28/2015 c56 37Applauze
Sierra sure has a lot on her hands with having so many of the campers at her house. Of course, AleHeather has to make the trouble, well mostly Heather.

You write a really good LeShawna and I could hear her voice inside my head as I was reading so nice job.

OMG Lindsay, what are you so dumb!? Maybe they should inject some brain cells into what little brains you have. You seriously need some help.

Of course, Justin shows up. He shows up uninvited at everything. He is one stick in the mud.

I wonder what LeShawna's going to do now that she knows. I'm very eager to know where this is going. Awesome chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.

-Josh
6/27/2015 c56 25Pepe's Red-Eyed Cousin
Oh crap! LeShawna knows! Or at least she knows the gist of it. This can't be good for Sierra. Maybe it is. But maybe it's not. As for Cody, well, the guy is officially a twat now. As well as an asshole. He wants to kill his soon-to-be ex-wife and unborn child because of the problems he himself have created. Well, a drunk person can show their true colours. It was hilarious how Cody did this, and pretty much followed Courtney and Sierra upstairs like a lost pup.

This chapter has crept into black comedy territory. The cast have turned a funeral into a bloody house party! Zeke bringing over all that booze, Tyler and Zeke dancing on coffee tables, Lindsay sobbing over Tyler only to shag Zeke and even DJ is getting tipsy. I'd hate to find out who was playing the music. I also liked the drama between Heather, Alejandro, Courtney, Noah, Sierra, LeShawna and Bridgette. Your fic is awesome as ever and hopefully you're computer will get fixed.

Anywho, I'm eager to find out what LeShawna does and I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/26/2015 c56 SargentEpsilon
Wow, that's quite the installment. So the pre-funeral get-together quickly turns into a drunken party. As for LeShawna, my guess is she checks what the house is low on, offers to go get more, and insists on bringing Sierra and Courtney along. During the drive, LeShawna threatens to rat them out unless they tell her the whole story. Courtney tries to work something else out, but Sierra's quick to explain as much of what's going on as she knows. When she reaches the part about Courtney's threat to kill DJ unless Sierra killed Chef, Courtney interrupts by explaining why she wanted Chef dead and claiming Sierra and LeShawna wouldn't understand because they never went through that. LeShawna discredits that claim by explaining that her mom went through something very similar a few years before Total Drama. After Sierra finishes her explanation, LeShawna comes up with some terms Courtney and Sierra have to agree to if they want her to keep the secret. The most important condition is that they and the others involved NEVER come after LeShawna's family. Also, LeShawna wants her family to stay out of this whenever possible.
4/28/2015 c55 Pepe's Red-Eyed Cousin
Noah knows about Mal! This could probably even out the odds in this conflict. I just hope that Noah and Courtney don't win, simply because they are smug. Courtney is smug about getting revenge on people who've wronged her, people who she feels have wronged her and people who just happened to live better lives. While Noah is smug because he thinks he's some magnificant bastard just because he ruins the lives of people he believes to be intellectually inferior. That's what makes them good villains, though, so keep up the smugness. It makes me want to root for Sierra even more. And Mal and Izzy too.

Keep up the good work. Your stories are awesome as always.
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