Reviews: New Enemies

7/6/2013 c7 NDHBFAN
Another great chapter.
Keep doing what your doing.
Update real quick!

7/6/2013 c6 NDHBFAN
What a great update. Love how you are writing all characters.

7/6/2013 c5 NDHBFAN
Happy to see that Callie and Frank broke up as well. Now if only Frank and Nancy would get out of their own way.

7/6/2013 c4 NDHBFAN
Another great chapter.

7/6/2013 c3 NDHBFAN
Excellent cliffhanger, well done.
Hoping that Frank tells Nancy that he and Callie also broke up.

7/6/2013 c2 NDHBFAN
Great chapter. Glad to see that Mattie is okay with private detectives looking into finding Matt, this will make it easier for Nancy, Joe, Bess and Frank.

7/6/2013 c1 ndhbfan
Good first chapter.

7/6/2013 c7 Raven678
Please update! I love it.

7/5/2013 c7 Cupcake
He killed a guy over a girl? Wow - is this guy SUPER shallow or what? I kinda feel sorry for Maddie though. And this Jimmy guy is cra-zy!

6/5/2013 c6

8sparkles321
I LOVED the way you included dry humor and exciting dialogue. 5 stars!

5/30/2013 c5 Guest
Great work. Please write a little more detail. Besides that really good

5/27/2013 c5 Guest
Write more write more you are doing a great job . WRITE MORE NOW
Or else also I love Joe's cheeseburger

5/24/2013 c5 Guest
Great work write more

5/23/2013 c5 Guest
Good

5/23/2013 c5 Guest
Great work

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