for New Enemies5/23/2013 c5 Guest
Great
Great
5/15/2013 c3 Eliza
DO MORE DO MORE DO MORE DO MORE!
I know what Franks gonna say to Nancy already!
Chow for now! Peace :)
DO MORE DO MORE DO MORE DO MORE!
I know what Franks gonna say to Nancy already!
Chow for now! Peace :)
5/14/2013 c3 
1VerityD
You've got a lot of great ideas, and I can't wait to see where you go from here. I'd love to see more description - it would help me picture the scenes more clearly. But you've definitely got me hooked!
1VerityDYou've got a lot of great ideas, and I can't wait to see where you go from here. I'd love to see more description - it would help me picture the scenes more clearly. But you've definitely got me hooked!
5/8/2013 c2 James Birdsong
Excellent two chapters oh of course.
Excellent two chapters oh of course.
5/6/2013 c2 Guest
good start. only one thing - did you mess up the ransom amount. 100? or did you mean 100k? just 100 is very low for such trouble.
good start. only one thing - did you mess up the ransom amount. 100? or did you mean 100k? just 100 is very low for such trouble.
5/4/2013 c1 Guest
Great start...yes keep going!
Great start...yes keep going!
5/6/2013 c2 8sparkles321
This is awesome! I like how you put a little bit of a cliff hanger element in! I wonder what will happen to Matt? My first fic is a Nancy Drew/Hardy Boys story, too! It's about Nancy's mother, and it is called The Mother She Never Knew.
8sparkles321This is awesome! I like how you put a little bit of a cliff hanger element in! I wonder what will happen to Matt? My first fic is a Nancy Drew/Hardy Boys story, too! It's about Nancy's mother, and it is called The Mother She Never Knew.
5/4/2013 c1 7catlover1033
Definitely worth continuing! Nice work! looking forward to another chapter!
7catlover1033Definitely worth continuing! Nice work! looking forward to another chapter!