for Five Times Neal was Sick (and slept on the Burkes' couch)11/18/2013 c5 
1Clara Brighet
These were really, really great. Especially that last one. Thanks for writing, I enjoyed reading it!
1Clara BrighetThese were really, really great. Especially that last one. Thanks for writing, I enjoyed reading it!
5/5/2013 c5 Guest
Very good!
Very good!
5/4/2013 c3 3HighOnAWindyHill
"I'd take him to Cape Verde myself" Haha yes! Love it! 3 Can totally picture Peter saying that. These are so sweet! Really enjoyed the last few:D Excited to read the others! Thanks for sharing these adorable stories33
3HighOnAWindyHill"I'd take him to Cape Verde myself" Haha yes! Love it! 3 Can totally picture Peter saying that. These are so sweet! Really enjoyed the last few:D Excited to read the others! Thanks for sharing these adorable stories33
5/4/2013 c5 CandyCakes
I really loved this story! You did such an awesome job with keeping everyone in character and with coming up with believable scenario for Neal having to stay with the job!
I really loved this story! You did such an awesome job with keeping everyone in character and with coming up with believable scenario for Neal having to stay with the job!
5/4/2013 c1 16alli1
I really liked each one of these-they all seemed to be in character, and showed the close relationship Neal has developed with the Burkes, in spite of a few bumps along the way.
16alli1I really liked each one of these-they all seemed to be in character, and showed the close relationship Neal has developed with the Burkes, in spite of a few bumps along the way.
5/4/2013 c5 Guest
loved it.
loved it.
5/4/2013 c5 peppe1951
another good one from you...can't wait to read more
another good one from you...can't wait to read more
5/4/2013 c5 3Nerd-Herd-27
These are all so sweet! I love the friendship / familial relationship between Neal, El, and Peter. Also, all of the chapters were very original, not overdone. Fantastic work!
3Nerd-Herd-27These are all so sweet! I love the friendship / familial relationship between Neal, El, and Peter. Also, all of the chapters were very original, not overdone. Fantastic work!
5/4/2013 c4 Peppe1951
that was cute, except for the part where Neal gets a broken arm
that was cute, except for the part where Neal gets a broken arm
5/4/2013 c3 Peppe1951
Salt water...strong salt water...poor Neal, I remember playing in the the Gulf of Mexico waters when young and how your eyes felt...good thing he is with his surrogate family during this time
Salt water...strong salt water...poor Neal, I remember playing in the the Gulf of Mexico waters when young and how your eyes felt...good thing he is with his surrogate family during this time
5/4/2013 c2 peppe1951
feeling better but something worries Peter enough to call Mozzie...good chapter, can't wait to read more
feeling better but something worries Peter enough to call Mozzie...good chapter, can't wait to read more
5/4/2013 c1 Peppe1951
I'm glad that Peter apologized and brought Neal home so he cud br treated for his cold symptoms...he really does care fr Neal...good chapter
I'm glad that Peter apologized and brought Neal home so he cud br treated for his cold symptoms...he really does care fr Neal...good chapter