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11/6/2013 c1 Theresa The Amaz
um... Add ing to the name cuz it didn't fit. Lol. This is waywaywaywaywaywaywaywaywaywayway better than the end of the actual book, the actual was sooooo depressing I was like omg there's water coming out of my eyes. (*SPOILER*) RIP Uriah and Tris. This way is so much betterer and I love it. Congrats Bestie!
6/21/2013 c1 Silent Reader
good D but one of my peeves is no paragraphs...doesn't really matter since this is so short, though. Good job!
5/28/2013 c1 Guest
This is so awesome you should continue it
5/7/2013 c1 THIS STALKER
So hey it's good. It's good. And I love it how Tobias can fight nightmares. Whith his hands. (Idk what confide means) LOVE THE LAST FEW SENTANCES... and yeah! Great job for a big inner like you. There are a few oopsies but those will get better as you continue writing. :) please contine its veryyy good. 3 the one and only
5/7/2013 c1 thisgurl3
This is good. Is good. Needs more detail. Pretty good for first writing. Like the end. Little confusing. But yeah. Continue its pretty godly. 3 the one and only
5/4/2013 c1 emderren
Amazing! I love it!

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