
5/6/2013 c3
18Doctor Rose Belikova
Hey(: this is a really good fic for English being your second language! I'm really enjoying it. Poor Rose, she's falling for Dimitri and she doesn't even know it! Although...might I make a suggestion? You should make Rose be eighteen, because seventeen year olds really can't get married legally in most states and in the states they can be, their parents must be present and/or give written consent. It would make more sense for Rose to be eighteen in this scenario(: Other than that, great job! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter(:
-Tatiana

Hey(: this is a really good fic for English being your second language! I'm really enjoying it. Poor Rose, she's falling for Dimitri and she doesn't even know it! Although...might I make a suggestion? You should make Rose be eighteen, because seventeen year olds really can't get married legally in most states and in the states they can be, their parents must be present and/or give written consent. It would make more sense for Rose to be eighteen in this scenario(: Other than that, great job! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter(:
-Tatiana
5/6/2013 c2 gothrockerchick
I need u to finish the rest of this story because on i started reading i was hooked. Pleassssssssse!
I need u to finish the rest of this story because on i started reading i was hooked. Pleassssssssse!
5/6/2013 c2
2swedish desigirl
i loooooove this story
its kind of different
when will u post the next chapter
cant wait to read it

i loooooove this story
its kind of different
when will u post the next chapter
cant wait to read it
5/6/2013 c2
5Clauxx
I liked the chapter, I wonder what is going to happen with Rose and Dimitri, Continue :)

I liked the chapter, I wonder what is going to happen with Rose and Dimitri, Continue :)
5/6/2013 c2 Brichisa
This story sounds amazing. I don't usually like AU within the VA fanfiction, but I'm making an exception for this story. It sounds real fun! Hope you update soon...!
This story sounds amazing. I don't usually like AU within the VA fanfiction, but I'm making an exception for this story. It sounds real fun! Hope you update soon...!
5/5/2013 c2
7poppyflowerpoet
oh. my. god. this is really epic so far! i cant wait to see how it turns out

oh. my. god. this is really epic so far! i cant wait to see how it turns out
5/5/2013 c2 amybelikov1
ok i must saw I just kind of found this story by total accident but i just loved it from the sumarry it's so darn good i hope you update soon...loved how they end it up married it was really good super good...well your new fan will be waiting for more of this great story
ok i must saw I just kind of found this story by total accident but i just loved it from the sumarry it's so darn good i hope you update soon...loved how they end it up married it was really good super good...well your new fan will be waiting for more of this great story
5/5/2013 c2
5Dimitria.ang
Wow ! I love this! This is so different I love it! I love how sassy yet modest Rose us and what a complete dick dimitri is! Plus I just love your style please keep it up ! Im excited !

Wow ! I love this! This is so different I love it! I love how sassy yet modest Rose us and what a complete dick dimitri is! Plus I just love your style please keep it up ! Im excited !