for The Story Of Naru Zor-El5/5/2018 c1 fangirl 1
dude you can't leave me hanging like this love this story need more
dude you can't leave me hanging like this love this story need more
2/7/2017 c1 Rongis
And this is why some reeetard with no knowledge about writing shouldn't be giving challenges to other just because you are too lazy to write the story yourself you give "challenge" to an author to write a fUuUcking mary sue fic for you hahahahahahaha pathetic.
And this is why some reeetard with no knowledge about writing shouldn't be giving challenges to other just because you are too lazy to write the story yourself you give "challenge" to an author to write a fUuUcking mary sue fic for you hahahahahahaha pathetic.
8/3/2013 c1 
30Engineer4Ever
has anyone taken this challenge? If so, could you update this then to tell us? It sounds great!
30Engineer4Everhas anyone taken this challenge? If so, could you update this then to tell us? It sounds great!
7/1/2013 c1 Turtwig58
It's an awesome story idea, I hope someone writes it and I have a quick question will Naru have the potential to be stronger than Superman since she absorbs solar energy better, mor efficiently than superman
It's an awesome story idea, I hope someone writes it and I have a quick question will Naru have the potential to be stronger than Superman since she absorbs solar energy better, mor efficiently than superman
6/4/2013 c1 YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING
i hope some one writes this story i would but i lack the talent for it
i hope some one writes this story i would but i lack the talent for it