for Kitsune Of The Elemental Nations5/6/2013 c1 Jikan Kugeki
"sasuke will die it is just a matter of time" - i don't know why but that makes me happy lol, Good first chapter i enjoy it, and is he going to try to collect all the 7 swordsman swords? i mean besides zabuza's?
"sasuke will die it is just a matter of time" - i don't know why but that makes me happy lol, Good first chapter i enjoy it, and is he going to try to collect all the 7 swordsman swords? i mean besides zabuza's?
5/5/2013 c1 seeker of true anime fan fic
Not bad man had a smile when naru go back very interesting choices on the harem including sakura nice touch of the seal breaking on her do u plan to do the same on ino though and r there more girls in this harem I hope shizuka and shion are in I know hinata would live to meet her blonde self now do u plan on adding the movie and filler parts too I personally would like elements of road to ninja in here but is ur story in which its the best one of the night continue on man seeker keeps in seeking
Not bad man had a smile when naru go back very interesting choices on the harem including sakura nice touch of the seal breaking on her do u plan to do the same on ino though and r there more girls in this harem I hope shizuka and shion are in I know hinata would live to meet her blonde self now do u plan on adding the movie and filler parts too I personally would like elements of road to ninja in here but is ur story in which its the best one of the night continue on man seeker keeps in seeking
5/5/2013 c1 BigBossVince
Grammar. Keep it consistent through the while thing. Keep up with capitalization as well as punctuation. When you bash don't make it cliche and mindless. Why would Kakashi outright attack Naruto in front of the whole council ? This could go somewhere but you have things to brush up on
Grammar. Keep it consistent through the while thing. Keep up with capitalization as well as punctuation. When you bash don't make it cliche and mindless. Why would Kakashi outright attack Naruto in front of the whole council ? This could go somewhere but you have things to brush up on
5/5/2013 c1 Kinunatzs The Eternal
i hate it when he leave and train only to return and serve konoha later it would be more believable if he became Freelance Ninja and it's seams that naruto is also paired Hinata i hate her with passion! so i'm not reading this fic ja ne
i hate it when he leave and train only to return and serve konoha later it would be more believable if he became Freelance Ninja and it's seams that naruto is also paired Hinata i hate her with passion! so i'm not reading this fic ja ne