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8/4/2020 c32 Melikalilly
I love this story
8/4/2020 c32 1SNEAKYKAYE
Can't wait for your next update! This was an awesome read and I can't wait for more! Stay Safe!
8/4/2020 c32 starchasr2737
Looks like Ginny keeps digging a bigger and bigger hole for herself and trying to drag her brothers down with her. Hopefully the mind healer will find what's wrong and get her some help. Surprised Ron is taking this seriously enough to ask for help with both his future career and getting help from the healer too! Wouldn't be surprised if damage was from 1st year right up to the war. Aunt Muriel is totally bamf in this story and I LOVE it!
8/4/2020 c32 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
8/1/2020 c29 Guest
Oie ...eu adorei a história, por favor continue ...
Estou aflita pela continuação
7/1/2020 c31 1Arya Morgana
#aplausos Bom saber que você vai continuar essa deliciosa história. Mal posso esperar pelos próximos capítulos.
7/1/2020 c31 mizzrazz72
Ginny will never give up.
7/1/2020 c31 Guest
Good chapter, they all offered up pretty good advice, considering how Ginny had been acting up to that point.
6/30/2020 c31 24JBubbles
hahahaha the Family trying to destroy Ginny and Harry still trying to save her? It made me laugh!

Stay safe
6/30/2020 c31 Hithw
So, the fic started out fairly ok, and as an enjoyable reading experience, but at this point I'm seeing some pretty unsettling leanings towards elitism/blood purity that's really... Uncomfortable to read in a positive light, particularly given the side that the Malfoys took during Voldemort's first reign and a major part of the second wizarding war, and the implications of such views. The levels of OOC it takes for Harry and Hermione both to simply accept such views without question is disruptive to the reading experience, and it would be good to tone it down a little.
Apart from that, Ginny and Ron - while they were both temperamental in both the books and the movies - are way out of character. Whenever I read about them in this fic, or read a chapter from their point of view, my immersion and suspension of disbelief is snapped in half. Again, I think it would be a good idea to tone down the OOC a little, as it will make the story feel like it's more believable rather than weasleybashing - which it is rather strongly coming off as.
The writing in general is not bad. There is the occasional run-on sentence, but nobody can earnestly say they've never written such a thing. Of course there's room for improvement, but I don't feel qualified to provide a critique of your writing style as much as the characters.
Another thing I would like to point out, is that *probably* the Wizarding World doesn't call it a magical restraining order - rather they simply call it a restraining order. Possibly in addition to this restraining order, they would probably use magic to ensure the order is being obeyed - or to alert the victim to the presence of their stalker/aggressor. Maybe something similar to the Caterwauling charm or a protective charm of some other kind?
6/29/2020 c31 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
I really like it!
6/29/2020 c31 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really liked it and appreciated it a lot.
6/29/2020 c31 autumngold
Thank goodness for Narcissa and Lucius! I would hate to find out what Ginny would do to Harry to get her rich boyfriend back. They are very smart to involve the Magical Law Enforcement so that Ginny can't claim anything against him. Also protecting his vaults against the harpy is wise. Thank you for the incredible update to your fabulous story!
6/29/2020 c31 Melikalilly
I love this story
5/7/2020 c30 6SoraMalfoySlythern
I feel u leave us on Clif hanging chapters. but I dying for them to be together forever luc and harry cuteee!
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