for Of The Wolves And The Orphans8/14/2020 c17 marvelrogue
hello friend are you going to update by any chance even though it has been seven years
hello friend are you going to update by any chance even though it has been seven years
3/18/2020 c17 Rose
I have to say, I absolutely love this story so far. You're writing technique and language are fantastic; and I sincerely hope you come back to this and finish it. It would be s shame to not finish such a well written piece so far. I hope to see more at some point.
I have to say, I absolutely love this story so far. You're writing technique and language are fantastic; and I sincerely hope you come back to this and finish it. It would be s shame to not finish such a well written piece so far. I hope to see more at some point.
10/3/2018 c4 
4The-Wize-1
Not to be a jerk, but isn’t Hawkeye a little too forceful here? He seems like he’s playing the villain instead of the mentor role
4The-Wize-1Not to be a jerk, but isn’t Hawkeye a little too forceful here? He seems like he’s playing the villain instead of the mentor role
3/11/2017 c1 MyCloudlessDream
There's something about this story, about the way you write, that makes you read every single detail and then go back and read it again and again. That is what sets your story apart from all the others, and I'm glad to have read it too.
There's something about this story, about the way you write, that makes you read every single detail and then go back and read it again and again. That is what sets your story apart from all the others, and I'm glad to have read it too.
5/31/2016 c5 4OhhPlease
Wow, Stockholm syndrome up the ass. This fic is making me hate Hawkeye so much like no joke. What they are doing to her is so far is so illegal, I expected better from Hawkeye. Time to read the other chapters I guess...
4OhhPleaseWow, Stockholm syndrome up the ass. This fic is making me hate Hawkeye so much like no joke. What they are doing to her is so far is so illegal, I expected better from Hawkeye. Time to read the other chapters I guess...
5/8/2016 c17 Whispers in the Storm
Sooooo much easier to read! Thanks for fixing the html. Keira is a fascinating character; I hope to read more!
Sooooo much easier to read! Thanks for fixing the html. Keira is a fascinating character; I hope to read more!
5/5/2016 c7 Whispers in the Storm
You need to fix the visible html that is obscuring your story. I can tell from the first few chapters that you have a lot of storytelling talent but the story is unreadable with all of the markup visible in every paragraph.
You need to fix the visible html that is obscuring your story. I can tell from the first few chapters that you have a lot of storytelling talent but the story is unreadable with all of the markup visible in every paragraph.
4/30/2016 c4 alex
wtf
wtf
2/28/2016 c5 Guest
Either read the story with all the extra letters and numbers you have in here cut them out or put them on the beginning I just can't understand anything and I'm going to stop reading this
Either read the story with all the extra letters and numbers you have in here cut them out or put them on the beginning I just can't understand anything and I'm going to stop reading this
9/13/2015 c5 64xLunaxNightingalexDuskx
this is a good story so far; but why are ch. 4 to 5 are in code?
~xLunaxNightingalexDuskx
64xLunaxNightingalexDuskxthis is a good story so far; but why are ch. 4 to 5 are in code?
~xLunaxNightingalexDuskx