for Of The Wolves And The Orphans5/2/2014 c10 
6Rushman2.0
What happened to Jackson?
And why does she want to leave? I thought that was in case she gets double crossed, but now she's talking like she is planning to do it no matter what.
6Rushman2.0What happened to Jackson?
And why does she want to leave? I thought that was in case she gets double crossed, but now she's talking like she is planning to do it no matter what.
5/2/2014 c9 Rushman2.0
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Sorry couldn't resist. So. Good.
I like reading training. I wanna see if he's a good trainer or not.
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Sorry couldn't resist. So. Good.
I like reading training. I wanna see if he's a good trainer or not.
5/2/2014 c8 Rushman2.0
Oh my god that doctor should be kicked off the Helli-carier! I feel so bad. That's all it takes to drown her. She's been through way too much.
Oh my god that doctor should be kicked off the Helli-carier! I feel so bad. That's all it takes to drown her. She's been through way too much.
5/2/2014 c6 Rushman2.0
you keep saying, "Don't go there," and it's driving me insane! So much foreshadowing and suspense!
you keep saying, "Don't go there," and it's driving me insane! So much foreshadowing and suspense!
5/2/2014 c4 Rushman2.0
This is kinda perverse. It's really well written, but he broke at least one of her ribs and probably dislocated at least one part of her arm. And then he dangled her out a window. And then breaks her nose. What the hell? I mean, the nose was probably to conceal her identity a bit, but seriously. It's really well written though.
This is kinda perverse. It's really well written, but he broke at least one of her ribs and probably dislocated at least one part of her arm. And then he dangled her out a window. And then breaks her nose. What the hell? I mean, the nose was probably to conceal her identity a bit, but seriously. It's really well written though.
5/2/2014 c1 Rushman2.0
Oh my gosh I was hooked with the first paragraph this is soooo good! I love it, and Jackson is so adorable. He's so brave, I can't believe it.
Oh my gosh I was hooked with the first paragraph this is soooo good! I love it, and Jackson is so adorable. He's so brave, I can't believe it.
4/30/2014 c14 12Spinosa
Finally got caught up with this story. And I have to say, I am really loving this. The beginning reminds me a bit of Ender's Game with the training school and all. Great book, and I'm guessing that's where you got your idea ;) I really can't wait to see what happens next.
12SpinosaFinally got caught up with this story. And I have to say, I am really loving this. The beginning reminds me a bit of Ender's Game with the training school and all. Great book, and I'm guessing that's where you got your idea ;) I really can't wait to see what happens next.
4/29/2014 c14 AsuraNight
I just read 14 chapters in one sitting lol, your story has managed to capture my attention from the beginning. Your story is pretty good, I can't wait for the next chapter ;)
I just read 14 chapters in one sitting lol, your story has managed to capture my attention from the beginning. Your story is pretty good, I can't wait for the next chapter ;)
4/29/2014 c14 6GiraffePanda2
OH I LOVE IT!
I loooooooove it!
hawkeye's lines were fantastic, so funny!
And I can really imagine her waering a dress like that, I love how you made something that's slightly cliche, (girly tom-boy wearing a dress) so, refreshing! I loved her flirting, it was priceless, I kept laughing.
Great job!
6GiraffePanda2OH I LOVE IT!
I loooooooove it!
hawkeye's lines were fantastic, so funny!
And I can really imagine her waering a dress like that, I love how you made something that's slightly cliche, (girly tom-boy wearing a dress) so, refreshing! I loved her flirting, it was priceless, I kept laughing.
Great job!
4/23/2014 c13 Guest
Oh. My. Gosh. This story, this writing, I am so hooked. I've read it a billion times over waiting for the next chapter! I love it, I love everything about it the characters, your writing, it's all magnificent! Please please continue! I do have two things though, when you said "technic" in chapter 12 you mean "technique". Also in this chapter, she "stands on cue" not "queue" (cuelike actor's cue and queue like a line) just though you might want to know :) but I LOVE IT so mucchh! Keep up the amazing work!
-Luce
Oh. My. Gosh. This story, this writing, I am so hooked. I've read it a billion times over waiting for the next chapter! I love it, I love everything about it the characters, your writing, it's all magnificent! Please please continue! I do have two things though, when you said "technic" in chapter 12 you mean "technique". Also in this chapter, she "stands on cue" not "queue" (cuelike actor's cue and queue like a line) just though you might want to know :) but I LOVE IT so mucchh! Keep up the amazing work!
-Luce