for Stargate the Sith's nightmare8/12/2021 c3 RDDash
I don't like the story. They found a ship, that's fine. Asgardians helped them, that's fine too. There's no way they just going to travel with that ship into another galaxy and interfere with their space guns. That's stupid.
I don't like the story. They found a ship, that's fine. Asgardians helped them, that's fine too. There's no way they just going to travel with that ship into another galaxy and interfere with their space guns. That's stupid.
3/26/2018 c3 Arthorius
Non-Interference laws are there for a reason. Having the Americans interfer clearly shows that Americans have no respect for other people's culture. And Thor is a coward for not removing advance ship from what is obvious a technology primitve faction state, seems Thor is willing to ignore the non-interferrence laws using a loophole...
Non-Interference laws are there for a reason. Having the Americans interfer clearly shows that Americans have no respect for other people's culture. And Thor is a coward for not removing advance ship from what is obvious a technology primitve faction state, seems Thor is willing to ignore the non-interferrence laws using a loophole...
3/14/2018 c3 Nameless
Good story.
Hope to see more chapters in the future.
Good story.
Hope to see more chapters in the future.
9/20/2017 c3 
1silverstreak93242
Greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing! I hope life has slowed down and decided to treat you better! I am hoping that this story is indeed not dead! It may not be the best writing, but that is what rewrites, and editing are for, I must admit I like the plot, the premise and the story line, and I am looking forward to reading more for this story, when your muse eventually lets the next chapters go, then the story will continue to grow and expand! Again, I am hoping this story is continued when you have the next chapters!
1silverstreak93242Greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing! I hope life has slowed down and decided to treat you better! I am hoping that this story is indeed not dead! It may not be the best writing, but that is what rewrites, and editing are for, I must admit I like the plot, the premise and the story line, and I am looking forward to reading more for this story, when your muse eventually lets the next chapters go, then the story will continue to grow and expand! Again, I am hoping this story is continued when you have the next chapters!
3/1/2016 c3 4lancelot.knight
ok awesome story so far and i love the premise! plus when the time for dialing atlantis comes up they can use a fully recharged destiny (destiny only couldn't dial earth because the capacitors were damaged and because of the extreme distance in the show!) It would be a good idea for the team to find the antarctic base early as well, perhaps have someone wonder about why destiny choose there for orbit and choose to do a full scan of antarctica up to a few miles deep with destinies sensors? they could then share the discovery with the asgard and get help perhaps findinganti replicator weapons in the database of the outpost? (I always thought there would be more to the base than show or discovered by the sgc after all both destiny and atlantis were supposedly built there so perhaps a shipyard and a few more buildings like a drone manufacturing plant and a zpm factory? i always liked the ones were zpm factories were basically satellites that used the destinies stellar plasma powerplant to both build and charge a zpm!) well good luck and please its been 3 years since you updated this so update soon :0
4lancelot.knightok awesome story so far and i love the premise! plus when the time for dialing atlantis comes up they can use a fully recharged destiny (destiny only couldn't dial earth because the capacitors were damaged and because of the extreme distance in the show!) It would be a good idea for the team to find the antarctic base early as well, perhaps have someone wonder about why destiny choose there for orbit and choose to do a full scan of antarctica up to a few miles deep with destinies sensors? they could then share the discovery with the asgard and get help perhaps findinganti replicator weapons in the database of the outpost? (I always thought there would be more to the base than show or discovered by the sgc after all both destiny and atlantis were supposedly built there so perhaps a shipyard and a few more buildings like a drone manufacturing plant and a zpm factory? i always liked the ones were zpm factories were basically satellites that used the destinies stellar plasma powerplant to both build and charge a zpm!) well good luck and please its been 3 years since you updated this so update soon :0
8/25/2015 c1 A Reader
you must have only caught a few episodes of SG:U to know the capabilities of the ship but missed others to not know that running the ftl for less than four hours damages the engines if not destroys them and even next to each other they won't dial each other with out some distance.
But beyond that it is an OK story though feels rushed.
you must have only caught a few episodes of SG:U to know the capabilities of the ship but missed others to not know that running the ftl for less than four hours damages the engines if not destroys them and even next to each other they won't dial each other with out some distance.
But beyond that it is an OK story though feels rushed.
10/18/2013 c3 Ivonniva
You have the potential for a really great story here. I would love to read more please.
You have the potential for a really great story here. I would love to read more please.
10/13/2013 c3 Guest
Can you continue with this it is great idea and very good so far
Can you continue with this it is great idea and very good so far