7/19/2013 c3 9kaesaku
I love this movie! JLC! :) poor Light.. I can't wait to read the happier parts of the story. Write soon! :)
I love this movie! JLC! :) poor Light.. I can't wait to read the happier parts of the story. Write soon! :)
6/2/2013 c3 lavender spring
That was such a nice chapter... poor Raito-kun :' (
Raye and him are so sweet! It would be good if Misa met them during a photo-shoot and then became best friends with the two, no romance though (because Raito-kun is gay, and Raye has a girlfriend). Then maybe Raye could move out with Naomi and him and Misa become roommates? Or him and L? It's probably a bad idea, but I read the others in reviews and wanted to give a different one : ) (even if it's not as good, you know?)
Please update soon : )
That was such a nice chapter... poor Raito-kun :' (
Raye and him are so sweet! It would be good if Misa met them during a photo-shoot and then became best friends with the two, no romance though (because Raito-kun is gay, and Raye has a girlfriend). Then maybe Raye could move out with Naomi and him and Misa become roommates? Or him and L? It's probably a bad idea, but I read the others in reviews and wanted to give a different one : ) (even if it's not as good, you know?)
Please update soon : )
5/31/2013 c3 Pinjaoncrack
And about Misa, maybe you should make her meet L and she could help him get back with Raito? Or maybe she could be Raito's fake girlfriend? That could be hilarious. She could meet Raito through his photography business with Raye? If you're gonna include her, don't make her as an individual character who doesn't meet the two main characters. However, if written properly, it could work and it would be a great addition to the story... Anyways, good luck! XD
And about Misa, maybe you should make her meet L and she could help him get back with Raito? Or maybe she could be Raito's fake girlfriend? That could be hilarious. She could meet Raito through his photography business with Raye? If you're gonna include her, don't make her as an individual character who doesn't meet the two main characters. However, if written properly, it could work and it would be a great addition to the story... Anyways, good luck! XD
6/2/2013 c3 1Seishirou Hitsugaya
Wanna have Naomi at apartment please. It will be interesting plot to see if somehow L came too and Naomi thought L was Raito's husband or something.. While Raito still act he doesn't know L and kept stabbing L's heart like this chapter!XD
Wooohoo, Sorry L, you are actually my DN favourite chara, but in this story, You kinda deserved it man!
Please update soon. Chapter after chapter, I love this fic more! :D
Wanna have Naomi at apartment please. It will be interesting plot to see if somehow L came too and Naomi thought L was Raito's husband or something.. While Raito still act he doesn't know L and kept stabbing L's heart like this chapter!XD
Wooohoo, Sorry L, you are actually my DN favourite chara, but in this story, You kinda deserved it man!
Please update soon. Chapter after chapter, I love this fic more! :D
6/2/2013 c3 gcsdki
Man I never would have thought of Light and Raye as best buds :-) L why were you such an idiot! though I wonder why L dint pick up on the fact that an amnesiac person wouldn't normally be so affected by something which he truly doesn't remember... Only someone still emotionally devastated could have felt that kind of pain... which I guess shows how guilty L feels, to not have realized that... reading that made my heart ache so can't blame him...
hmmm maybe having Misa meet up with Light can speed up things, u know, getting L jealous or something... err... ok that's too corny... :-) I hope somebody will be there to hold Soichiro back when he meets L for the case... update soon
Man I never would have thought of Light and Raye as best buds :-) L why were you such an idiot! though I wonder why L dint pick up on the fact that an amnesiac person wouldn't normally be so affected by something which he truly doesn't remember... Only someone still emotionally devastated could have felt that kind of pain... which I guess shows how guilty L feels, to not have realized that... reading that made my heart ache so can't blame him...
hmmm maybe having Misa meet up with Light can speed up things, u know, getting L jealous or something... err... ok that's too corny... :-) I hope somebody will be there to hold Soichiro back when he meets L for the case... update soon
5/31/2013 c3 4ChillingShadow
Misa? Hmm... I guess but, not romantically right? Wanna L's face..
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Worth the wait :3
Misa? Hmm... I guess but, not romantically right? Wanna L's face..
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Worth the wait :3
5/31/2013 c3 Pinjaoncrack
Yaaayy! You're back! Awesome chapter. It was so sad. When Light was talking to Ryuzaki, I was about to start crying; I really connect to my reading haha. Light is an amazing actor. Can't wait for next chapter. Glad to have you back. See you next time n_n
Yaaayy! You're back! Awesome chapter. It was so sad. When Light was talking to Ryuzaki, I was about to start crying; I really connect to my reading haha. Light is an amazing actor. Can't wait for next chapter. Glad to have you back. See you next time n_n
5/31/2013 c3 891RedRoses
So cruel of you Ratio. I'm surprised though that L didn't pick up on the fact that, for someone with amnesia you sure have a lot of emotion vested in attacking the guy who left you. I mean, one of the things about amnesia is along with the memories, you lose your emotional connection too. So I could understand you being a little miffed but you showed a lot of anger.
Then again, L is probably not thinking straight due to his emotional vestment in you. So that works for you. :)
So cruel of you Ratio. I'm surprised though that L didn't pick up on the fact that, for someone with amnesia you sure have a lot of emotion vested in attacking the guy who left you. I mean, one of the things about amnesia is along with the memories, you lose your emotional connection too. So I could understand you being a little miffed but you showed a lot of anger.
Then again, L is probably not thinking straight due to his emotional vestment in you. So that works for you. :)
5/31/2013 c2 91RedRoses
I think genetics would intervene from the children being that special. So Ratio doesn't have amnesia? It was just an excuse? He better tell his dad that so his dad doesn't look at L all confused when L brings it up, I mean, L is a master detective so he could probably tell from body language that something is "up."
I think genetics would intervene from the children being that special. So Ratio doesn't have amnesia? It was just an excuse? He better tell his dad that so his dad doesn't look at L all confused when L brings it up, I mean, L is a master detective so he could probably tell from body language that something is "up."
5/31/2013 c3 3Remmy18
Lol, yes! Misa should be in the story! Your story rocks, keep up the good work!
Lol, yes! Misa should be in the story! Your story rocks, keep up the good work!
5/20/2013 c2 7HistoryWizardNerd22
I love this pairing! This is definitely an original plot! I can't wait for the next chapter!
I love this pairing! This is definitely an original plot! I can't wait for the next chapter!
5/12/2013 c2 lavender spring
So Light doesn't really have amnesia. I wonder how long it will be before L finds out...
Look forward to what happens next : )
Please update soon!
Maybe a suggestion would be a bit too much swearing in this chapter (for me anyway) : )
So Light doesn't really have amnesia. I wonder how long it will be before L finds out...
Look forward to what happens next : )
Please update soon!
Maybe a suggestion would be a bit too much swearing in this chapter (for me anyway) : )
5/10/2013 c2 Maki-chan
HA ! With that L should learn a lesson about love! I cant belive he left Light that easyly and now is sad cuz he thinks he is fine without him! I think that Light has to make him suffer now, and they can get together later :D u hav a great story there!
HA ! With that L should learn a lesson about love! I cant belive he left Light that easyly and now is sad cuz he thinks he is fine without him! I think that Light has to make him suffer now, and they can get together later :D u hav a great story there!
5/12/2013 c2 1Seishirou Hitsugaya
Ee so Raito had regained his memories before he met L..
I actuqlly want to see a chapter dedicated to when he had had the accident and later regained his bitter and painful relationship with L. How he felt and spend his days of it.. Wanna know..
I figured Mello would discuss it with the other genii. Haha.. L're screwed..
Hmm.. Why did Penber had to hug Raito? It looked like a RayexLight there. Ughh. Patted shoulder is more appropiate..
Anyway, the chap is good so don't worry. Please update soon..
Ee so Raito had regained his memories before he met L..
I actuqlly want to see a chapter dedicated to when he had had the accident and later regained his bitter and painful relationship with L. How he felt and spend his days of it.. Wanna know..
I figured Mello would discuss it with the other genii. Haha.. L're screwed..
Hmm.. Why did Penber had to hug Raito? It looked like a RayexLight there. Ughh. Patted shoulder is more appropiate..
Anyway, the chap is good so don't worry. Please update soon..
5/9/2013 c1 Maki-chan
Yay! I already like it! :3
Yay! I already like it! :3