for Marcel Bonin lost in time10/3/2014 c26 
4darkemp
Ah, so exciting, I wonder what her plan is! And I love how powerful Marcel is, but she's still her same old vulnerable self! Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
4darkempAh, so exciting, I wonder what her plan is! And I love how powerful Marcel is, but she's still her same old vulnerable self! Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
8/10/2014 c25 darkemp
OMG this is so good, you deserve every one of your reviews and follows and favs :) Khan is such an asshole but so superior and cocky, and he's so mean to Marcel! Poor Spock, I hope everything works out. I can't believe Khan would have his own grandchild aborted, but then again I can because of the whole Eugenics thing... great chapter, can't wait for more!
OMG this is so good, you deserve every one of your reviews and follows and favs :) Khan is such an asshole but so superior and cocky, and he's so mean to Marcel! Poor Spock, I hope everything works out. I can't believe Khan would have his own grandchild aborted, but then again I can because of the whole Eugenics thing... great chapter, can't wait for more!
7/25/2014 c24 Jo
I have been following you, great job.
I have been following you, great job.
7/25/2014 c24 Nixie.Naajix
pretty good for being typed on a phone/app :D Do you have a Beata reader yet?
pretty good for being typed on a phone/app :D Do you have a Beata reader yet?
7/25/2014 c24 dhsrthaehtah
I knew I heard that name somewhere! Marla McGivers. I KNEW IT! GAAH! Poor Marcel - though I should really be saying poor Marla, because when Spock finds her he's going to knock her teeth in. Also, I am wondering what her connection to Khan is...it must be intriguing if he's being (somewhat) tender.
I knew I heard that name somewhere! Marla McGivers. I KNEW IT! GAAH! Poor Marcel - though I should really be saying poor Marla, because when Spock finds her he's going to knock her teeth in. Also, I am wondering what her connection to Khan is...it must be intriguing if he's being (somewhat) tender.
7/25/2014 c24 DipsyDrummerBoy
Wait, at the end did Khan think Marcel was someone else (he called her Alice)? Or have I missed something? :/ either way I love this story!
Wait, at the end did Khan think Marcel was someone else (he called her Alice)? Or have I missed something? :/ either way I love this story!
7/25/2014 c24 4darkemp
omg this is so exciting! Who is Alice that Khan mistook Marcel for her? And what softened Khan so quickly? So many possibilities, I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
4darkempomg this is so exciting! Who is Alice that Khan mistook Marcel for her? And what softened Khan so quickly? So many possibilities, I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
7/25/2014 c23 darkemp
Ah I love jealous Spock, and Marcel's banter and relationship with Leonard is really warm and fun. And another pregnancy! I am both happy and nervous about that!
Ah I love jealous Spock, and Marcel's banter and relationship with Leonard is really warm and fun. And another pregnancy! I am both happy and nervous about that!
7/23/2014 c23 1Sun Queen 01
Okay I really love this story but come on this chapter was a waste of time. It doesn't follow well and is confusing. I sad because I know you can do better.
1Sun Queen 01Okay I really love this story but come on this chapter was a waste of time. It doesn't follow well and is confusing. I sad because I know you can do better.