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8/31/2014 c7 1Terran14
I know it is a bit late to be reviewing this chapter but it seems Abit odd that Kurumu, Keito and Mizore were able to overpower Tsukune and trap him while he seems a girl who he see's as his being hurt by them.

Tsukune is shown in your story to become even stronger when those he claims as his are threatened or hurt but at the end he doesn't really seem to care and let's them get away with it.

Tsukune should of punished them by not allowing them to have any intimate relations with him for a week for basiclly attacking him and hurting Moka for no reason. Seems like this is one of those story's where the main male character who despite being very powerful becomes a wimp when it comes to girls he is close to.
7/3/2014 c8 3KageFireGal
interesting story
2/7/2014 c1 blackblood567
good story but make new chapters
1/17/2014 c3 some random dude
this chapter is a bit confusing but good none the less
1/17/2014 c1 some random dude
an orc is a D class not an A class
1/14/2014 c5 some random dude
you are pretty decent at writing sex scenes, i have read great ones and ones that sucked dick (pardon the horrible pun) and this is good and more then a good attemt
1/13/2014 c1 some random dude
i like this, although to be honest i like all of the fan fics in which tsukune is not a complete whimp. but that aside this is very good
9/4/2013 c8 fooler
Hello? Are you there? Update
9/4/2013 c8 Guest
Love it!
9/4/2013 c8 Guest
Please add Ria to the story. She is a OC character. Read the fanfic Get what you wanted. Have tsukune dominate Gyukuro, Akua, kahula, and Ria.
8/24/2013 c8 Guest
Not bad. ... Update! Me want more chapters!
8/6/2013 c8 2JohneyTiger
ok first of all i dont like the norse mythology in here i dont like how ooc they are i dont like how it VERY rushed and undeveloped and i especially dont like how you insulted capu 3 for its plot. now i wasnt reading this to bash on it cause i really gave it a chance but it is just complete bull crap you shouldnt be insulting others stories till yours doesnt suck k?
7/22/2013 c8 ajjr12
here idea nymph and have like nympmaniacs you can see why
7/22/2013 c8 1SaiyanIncubus
This is a great story but i think you rushing it a little and i was wondering if your going to add any manga characters
7/14/2013 c8 ethan.lukkar
Wonderful chapter can wait for more please update soon
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