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7/15/2015 c1 WhiteTigerBlackPanther
There are tons of inconsistency in this story and it jumps around like crazy, the story line is a good one, but could have been developed more and could have gone into much more detail, if it was reworked, and tweaked coudl be really really good. I am confused on how LUke came in as a John Doe and then suddenly the family is there asking about him by name and the hospital knows his name? there are other things like that as well...
7/10/2014 c2 Tauna P Strawn
Hold it...they have a John Doe but the next second the Dukes are asking about him...and the hospital knows exactly who he is? WHEN did they find out and HOW did they find out?

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