
7/4/2013 c2
28Sonanoka21093
Once again, I like what I see. I enjoyed him making his way into the shrine like that! He always has the most interesting point of view, I've found. Not to mention knowing things that many take a long time to figure out! Such as the standard greeting.

Once again, I like what I see. I enjoyed him making his way into the shrine like that! He always has the most interesting point of view, I've found. Not to mention knowing things that many take a long time to figure out! Such as the standard greeting.
5/12/2013 c1 Sonanoka21093
One word of advice: Try to not stretch yourself too thin. ...How does that count as one word? Anywho, I quite enjoyed that, and look forward to more. I wonder just what his young look shall be? I half expect his eyes to stay closed.
One word of advice: Try to not stretch yourself too thin. ...How does that count as one word? Anywho, I quite enjoyed that, and look forward to more. I wonder just what his young look shall be? I half expect his eyes to stay closed.