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6/1/2013 c2 8Wolfsbane706
Don't panic, Arke. It's only Yuuka.

I think Aya going to a party in her birthday suit would have been intriguing to say the least, lol.
6/1/2013 c2 28Sonanoka21093
Quite liked the chapter. It was, as is the usual, quite interesting. I like Duster. She like to yank your chain in various ways. Maybe literally, if one is an oni, or otherwise a possessor of chains. I wonder if everyone has something she enjoys yanking? If my guess is right, it requires that it annoys them. I wonder what it would feel like to have an artery yanked? Can't imagine it would feel good.
6/1/2013 c2 5TCAnimorph
I laughed out loud. For real. Which as you know is rare.

Best parts:
Kanako hid behind Mima (who was trying to make herself invisible)
As usual, we all missed most of the conversation.
Miss Hakurei wants us at the festival, and she's already drunk.
It looked like there was more lace than actual cloth.
Sanae had chosen to take on a blue and white version of Reimu's outfit as a joke.

And best of all,

And then there was Aya. She had discarded all her black and white, and if it weren't for Satori catching her in time, would have gone out like that.
5/14/2013 c1 8Wolfsbane706
Arke mentioned keeping her wings warm. The way I see it, you should also have her cover how a Satori keeps her third eye from getting too cold.
5/13/2013 c1 5TCAnimorph
Kanako and Mima? ;; You're evil. You are so. So. Evil. Mima is my favorite and I haaaaaaate Kanakoooo.
5/13/2013 c1 28Sonanoka21093
Definitely better this time around. Having a setting and a friend sure has improved this story! Almost completely different, too! Also, it's good of you to point out that her- wait, now that I think about it, was it ever stated if the dusk tengu was a girl or a boy? Well, either way, it was good of you to point out that their mind reading is weaker this time.

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