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5/24/2013 c1 29Edhla
Hi there :) Thank you for writing- this is an excellent idea and you obviously know where you want the story to go. There were a number of syntax errors and punctuation errors in your fic, and the indicators you've used to indicate POV changes are a bit confusing and distracting from the piece. I'm actually not familiar with your fandom so I wouldn't be of much help, but perhaps a beta reader who's familiar with the original work would be able to help out? Good luck and keep writing x

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