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7/19/2013 c1 1Strykerclaw96
O.o
5/23/2013 c1 22Gunlord500
Not bad, not bad at all. Sometimes it's a little repetitive, like "Castle of Ylisse" twice in the first paragraph, but otherwise ok. I loved the line about Sully riding him like a horse XD XD XD Nice work!
5/22/2013 c1 ZTurtle
Thanks for writing this! I like Sully with Chrom the most, since I'm a sap for the whole "Childhood Friend romance." But any way, good job! Heh, the ending was pretty funny!
5/13/2013 c1 dark drow
do...do my eyes deceive me? some one wrote about this pairing...*rubs eyes* still there...PRAISE THOR! glorious day! huzzah! I can only assume you paired these two up in game too? well welcome to the under-appreciated pairings club! haha xD

but seriously though, THANK YOU, for writing about this two these two really share a funny and interesting dynamic that I always hoped to see at least A fanfic of them. great characterizations, and I like the setting, (potentialnally) pregnant woman want morning snu-snu and they shall have snu-snu! again great fic, few awkward sentences here and there (I.E. "Chrom's head then snapped back, caught with a lot of surprise and shock to hear the voice" can easyily be simplified to "surprised, Chrom gasped in surprise, and snapped/turned on the voice") other then that you really portrayed a great,and funny, scene within your writing. great job! I can only ask that you keep on writing you can only get better! it is a pleasure to read. till next please take care and have a good day

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