for Master and His Kitten7/6/2024 c59 Wishfull-star
Ah how sweet now Neville has found his mate, awesome chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
Ah how sweet now Neville has found his mate, awesome chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
7/6/2024 c16 Hedie Begley
I found a mistake in this chapter that bugs me a little so imma help. Its after the healer gave fay and lucas the instructions for helping harry. Heres the fixed sentence in the paragraph:
“It was a long time before his mother calmed down. Once she did she wiped her face and fixed her clothes.” I love the story so far if i find anything else that bugs me ill let you know and help fix it. Thank you for writing!
I found a mistake in this chapter that bugs me a little so imma help. Its after the healer gave fay and lucas the instructions for helping harry. Heres the fixed sentence in the paragraph:
“It was a long time before his mother calmed down. Once she did she wiped her face and fixed her clothes.” I love the story so far if i find anything else that bugs me ill let you know and help fix it. Thank you for writing!
7/6/2024 c16 Hedie Begley
QUICK! Someone call imp! We need to murder some ppl again
…. oh wait thats the oppositeP
QUICK! Someone call imp! We need to murder some ppl again
…. oh wait thats the oppositeP
5/11/2024 c58 
1daithi4377
Diggle is an arse, hopefully they round the rest up and get the other badges. Im a bit surprised the friends couldnt come to the school fir the boys birthday but if anyone was watching the. School it might ip them off.
1daithi4377Diggle is an arse, hopefully they round the rest up and get the other badges. Im a bit surprised the friends couldnt come to the school fir the boys birthday but if anyone was watching the. School it might ip them off.
5/11/2024 c40 daithi4377
I though the toad was arrested for breaking into Amelia’s office years ago and fired as Undersecretary why is she back in the job?
I though the toad was arrested for breaking into Amelia’s office years ago and fired as Undersecretary why is she back in the job?
4/3/2024 c57 Wishfull-star
Lol that was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
Lol that was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)