9/29/2002 c1 akuma-tenshi
oi! oi! great fic! tho i haven't read everything yet. actually i only got as far as half of the 2nd chapter. demo... i caught a few snippets of conversations while i was editing it in word. yup! i printed it. only up to chapter 4... gomen. i can't let my mom caught me. if she saw me using the computer while i was doing laundry, she's going to kill me! (with her endless lecture that is. ^^;;)

Anou ne... the fic as i said earlier is really great! grabe! saludo ako sayo! di ko alam may natatago ka palang talento! *grins* please continue ne? onegai? *stares with puppy dog eyes*

my comments on ayami: anou... i think aya-chan is really hyperactive and overly genki (on the outside that is). and also... grabe! she's really tall huh! i wanna be like her! mwahahaha ^_^

my comments on shiro-san: grrrrrr im really angry at that do ahou! imagine... leaving his daughter because she reminds him so much of her deceased wife! can i borrow him for a few hours... ill just torture him a bit! grrr ill teach that man a lesson or two! *feral grin* *turns into akuma mode... luckily tenshi mode was able to stamp akuma mode to normal* but really... i hate that guy! i hope he at least will not forget about his promise to his daughter. =(

my comments on the story: the pacing is really great. its exciting and the titles of the chapters are really intresting. ^_^ ehehe di kasi ako marunong maglagay ng titles sa bawat chapter... or maybe im just too lazy. ^^;; me a lazy pig! also how you dealt with the problems of different pt of view is extraordinary... (u know ung may mga title pa kung si ayami na or si rukawa) ^_^ ur style in writing is really new for me but its also great. (nope. d me nambobola... that's really what i feel)

all in all the story is great kahit na hindi ko pa nababasa lahat. hmmm... can't w8 to read the other chapters. gomen! nagbasa kasi me ng histo last night. ^^;;

AHA! may bago ka palang fic ha! tungkol naman kay micchy-kun! wai! .

9/29/2002 c10 renei
wow... ayami's so sweet... deep down i know she likes rukawa! why else would she be concerned? anyway, continue! later.

9/27/2002 c5 13Ginnie
*starts singing*

"Ako'y isang pinoy / Sa puso't diwa / Pinoy na isinilang / sa aking bansa..."

parang mali yata yung lyrix ko...

niway...

Wala lang. Nasa A/N plng ako sa umpisa, nag-scroll down na aq pra mg-revu... so m gona read wyl reviewing...

practice makes perfect, but nobody's perfect, so why practice?

katamad tapusin... matutulog na ako...

9/27/2002 c3 Ginnie
Huwaat?

Hehe...

Mare, gulo ah! A little more editing naman jan, nakakalito, eh!

9/27/2002 c1 Ginnie
Ndi ko pa nbabasa yung kwnto... wla lang... binasa k yung bio mo...

Hehehe...

QSci k dati? Soph ako ngayon sa Phil.Sci.HS (better known as "pisay") hehe...

Grabe a... manila? bakit, nid k b ng-try sa UP Diliman? Wla lang... kapwa "iskolar ng bayan" pla kta, eh! Hehe... la lang... Cge, bbsahin k n...

9/24/2002 c4 Kiku
Story is interesting.

But layout is not very good because line is too long. Mixing "talking" and story together makes it not clear and uneasy to read.

I wonder if it would be better for you to seperate "talking" and story in different lines.

9/22/2002 c9 renei
arianne, hey... i haven't actually read 8 and 9 yet but im going to be giving a review... kasi tatamarin na akong magkonect mamaya...

nice work on this fic.. actually, im looking forward to it that's why i always click it when i see your story. good luck and hope you continue!

later.

9/22/2002 c9 akira22
i like...j

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watev...

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