
1/4/2003 c20
7Hibaku
YAAAAY!
YOU UPDATED!
SO FAST!
WOOOO!
Okay, so you mean a well-rounded critique... Aa. Wakatta, wakatta.
EEEEK! Ru is SOOOO sweet! AAAAA! I LIKE! Umm... Yeah, OOC. But... I think it isn't THAT ooc... and according to Eliar-san's def. of MarySue, this isn't one, so again, don't worry. haha... if someone ever flames you bout that ask them to come look for me. or eliar-san.
okay. the matches. wow. that long? 1 to 2 months? they must be really good by now, ne, shohoku...
ganbatte, maemi-san.

YAAAAY!
YOU UPDATED!
SO FAST!
WOOOO!
Okay, so you mean a well-rounded critique... Aa. Wakatta, wakatta.
EEEEK! Ru is SOOOO sweet! AAAAA! I LIKE! Umm... Yeah, OOC. But... I think it isn't THAT ooc... and according to Eliar-san's def. of MarySue, this isn't one, so again, don't worry. haha... if someone ever flames you bout that ask them to come look for me. or eliar-san.
okay. the matches. wow. that long? 1 to 2 months? they must be really good by now, ne, shohoku...
ganbatte, maemi-san.
1/4/2003 c20 g94w85vyhtkrd
That was one of the best chapter of the story you know... maybe it's because of that cute(as quoted from Ayako) scene about them missing each other... Anyway, nothing much to say except I like it. Couldn't wait to see how the things will turn out
That was one of the best chapter of the story you know... maybe it's because of that cute(as quoted from Ayako) scene about them missing each other... Anyway, nothing much to say except I like it. Couldn't wait to see how the things will turn out
1/3/2003 c19 micchan1
hey! ok ka lang? i was wondering what was that all about onehellofabitch. don't mind! your fic is really nice!
saka tell her na tarantado pala siya eh!
pakialamera! walang magawa sa buhay!
hey! ok ka lang? i was wondering what was that all about onehellofabitch. don't mind! your fic is really nice!
saka tell her na tarantado pala siya eh!
pakialamera! walang magawa sa buhay!
1/3/2003 c19 SMILEY
i really really awfully love your story. i just think that the word "CHE" is awfully used too much, but the flow of the story is really clear and i appreciate that you don't change much of the attitude of the characters unlike other authors who completely change their attitudes. i really like ayami. she's the type of girl i really like (don't get me wrong I'm a GIRL) i just like her to be one of my friends. Please update your story and let the ending be Rukawa/ayami
T.Y
SMILEY;)
i really really awfully love your story. i just think that the word "CHE" is awfully used too much, but the flow of the story is really clear and i appreciate that you don't change much of the attitude of the characters unlike other authors who completely change their attitudes. i really like ayami. she's the type of girl i really like (don't get me wrong I'm a GIRL) i just like her to be one of my friends. Please update your story and let the ending be Rukawa/ayami
T.Y
SMILEY;)
1/1/2003 c16
6akuma-tenshi
oi! babae!
finally... nabasa ko na ang chap. 16 ng fic mo!
nge? bakit ganon? ang pangit naman! hmph!
tee hee hee joke lang! peace tayo ne?
I.COULD.NOT.BELIEVE.THAT.BITCH.OF.A.FLAMER.
my god! when you told me bout it, i had no idea that the flame was THAT BAD! believe me! i shouted in front of the computer. my brothers looked at me as if i've grown another head. duh? *sigh* they just understand...
eniweis... back to business... the flame was HORRIBLE, to put it mildly! if i were flamed like that... i'd be traumatized and will never attempt to write anymore. but DON'T YOU DARE DO that, 'kay? ang daming magagalit sayo... including me. ehehe mas magagalit pala sila sa akin for giving you ideas. *hides as angry shrieks and growls filled the air*
first and foremost of all... i don't think this is another of those Mary Sue character fics at all. i really hate Mary Sue fics! and believe me... even if we're friends... i'll surely NEVER READ your fic if i think its another Mary Sue one. and i'm not kidding and i am especially NOT doing this or typing this just to make you feel better. errr... just a little, i guess. pero believe me... i'm serious about what i'm saying. i've never been THIS serious my whole life. even when i was taking my college entrance exams! ^^;;
second, i'll admit that your fic is long... but SO WHAT? as long as it's good... kahit na pagkahaba-haba pa niyan, patuloy na babasahin pa rin yan ng mga taong marunong mag-appreciate ng isang magandang fic! hah!
hell! i couldn't help but laugh out loud when i'm reading your fic... except of course pag serious na ang mood at ma-drama of course. ^^;;
by the way... ang galing naman... naipasok mo si sendoh sa fic mo. teeheehee i also want to touch sendoh's hair! waaahhh! buti pa si ayami-chan!
hmm... sendoh likes ayami. i didn't know he likes barbaric women. tee hee hee joke lang pow! *wink wink* but i must agree... she's so kawaii! and very amusing too! *grins*
teka... speaking of kawaii...ilang beses bang sinabi ni sendoh ang word na yun (both english and japanese, i think) sa chapters 16 and 17? he seems fond of that word. teehee ^_^;;
'kay... let's go to the topic bout the summary. DUH? HELL! WHO CARES? I CERTAINLY DON'T! wadahellisthatflamer'stalkin'bout? it actually doesn't matter. hindi naman yung summary ang sukatan kung maganda o hindi ang isang story. DAMN IT!
alam mo may nabasa akong book na talagang na-hook ako! AS IN! too bad it's out of print already! waaahhhhh! *floods room with tears* oopppsss! balik na tayo sa topic. it's a book written by Mercedes Lackey, entitled THE LAST HERALD MAGE. err...well it's shounen-ai for you and you know i like shounen-ai. but that's not it... hindi lang yun ang gusto ka sa story... i like the story as a whole... yung feelings, moods, characters, setting, plot... hell! pati na rin yung style of writing! i like everything bout it! i'm totally addicted to it! tulad ng addiction ko sa anime... and you know how addicted i am to anime. ^^;; and the funny thing about the book is... ANG PANGIT NG SUMMARY! AS IN! wala talagang connection! hindi naman yun ang nangyari sa story! sheeshh! and that's a very good example kung bakit hindi naman msukatan ang summary sa quality ng story. i hope you got my point after all those things i said. *sweatdrops profusely*
and about the title... i like it! it's really amusing! teeheehee
and of course... the grammar! well duh! excuse moi! i'd like to point out that NOBODY IS PERFECT! except God of course... i guess?
mas marami pa nga akong grammar mistakes sa mga fic ko and also... even english teachers make mistakes! GRABE HA! SUCH A STUPID THING TO POINT OUT! girl, i've read fics with really, really bad grammar... so bad they gave me headaches... and believe me... wala sa kalahati ng mistakes nila ang mistakes mo. teka... tama ba pagkakasabi ko... or should it be the other way around? gomen nasai. i'm just a mere mortal. ^^;; heck! hindi ko maintindihan yung fic dahil sa grammar errors!
pati na rin dun sa 'pa-cute way' daw ng paghingi mo ng comments and reviews... haaay nakuuuu! grabe na toh! SUPER! ANO BANG PAKI-ALAM MOHHHHHHHH! tama si wadohui... bakit ka nag-review? kakaloko namang buhay to oh! tsk! tsk!
alam mo maemi, sa tingin ko pa-epal lang yung flamer mo. wala sigurong pumapansin sa kanya. teeheehee ngayon meron na db? hmm... good idea yata yun ah. hehehe just joking. ngayon siguro matatahimik na siya dahil finally!... may pumapansin na sa kanya! ^^;; what a weird reasoning i have!
i know i don't have a talent in writing... wala akong kakayahan na makasulat ng isang story na makakakuha ng 147 (take note, 147) reviews! halimaw! never in this lifetime... even in the next lifetimes! isa lang ang masasabi ko...I.LOVE.YOUR.FIC. it really is very amusing...a good break after reading too much angsty fics from x/99 and TB... at hindi ko ito binabasa dahil sa magkaibigan tayo. walang sinuman ang nakakapilit sa kin na gumawa ng kahit anong ayoko namang gawin. pag ayoko... ayoko talaga! kahit itanong mo pa sa mama ko. i hope you get my point. the nerve of that person para sabihin na you're just using friends para dumami ang reviews mo...and using really good writers at that!
another thing... hindi ako mabait! i'm not nice at all! hmph! i'm a bad bad person... you don't have any idea how bad i am! ^^;; really!
and i'm also not a good fic writer. nothing i write is good enuf to be able to attract so much attention. but at least i can appreciate a good fic. i may not show it that much... dahil hindi ako nakaka-review masyado... pero from my point of view, i think your fic is great!
i hope you'll take it easy, ne?
and i hope you'll write more!
dami mo ngang fans eh! ^_~
ganbatte~! mata ne!

oi! babae!
finally... nabasa ko na ang chap. 16 ng fic mo!
nge? bakit ganon? ang pangit naman! hmph!
tee hee hee joke lang! peace tayo ne?
I.COULD.NOT.BELIEVE.THAT.BITCH.OF.A.FLAMER.
my god! when you told me bout it, i had no idea that the flame was THAT BAD! believe me! i shouted in front of the computer. my brothers looked at me as if i've grown another head. duh? *sigh* they just understand...
eniweis... back to business... the flame was HORRIBLE, to put it mildly! if i were flamed like that... i'd be traumatized and will never attempt to write anymore. but DON'T YOU DARE DO that, 'kay? ang daming magagalit sayo... including me. ehehe mas magagalit pala sila sa akin for giving you ideas. *hides as angry shrieks and growls filled the air*
first and foremost of all... i don't think this is another of those Mary Sue character fics at all. i really hate Mary Sue fics! and believe me... even if we're friends... i'll surely NEVER READ your fic if i think its another Mary Sue one. and i'm not kidding and i am especially NOT doing this or typing this just to make you feel better. errr... just a little, i guess. pero believe me... i'm serious about what i'm saying. i've never been THIS serious my whole life. even when i was taking my college entrance exams! ^^;;
second, i'll admit that your fic is long... but SO WHAT? as long as it's good... kahit na pagkahaba-haba pa niyan, patuloy na babasahin pa rin yan ng mga taong marunong mag-appreciate ng isang magandang fic! hah!
hell! i couldn't help but laugh out loud when i'm reading your fic... except of course pag serious na ang mood at ma-drama of course. ^^;;
by the way... ang galing naman... naipasok mo si sendoh sa fic mo. teeheehee i also want to touch sendoh's hair! waaahhh! buti pa si ayami-chan!
hmm... sendoh likes ayami. i didn't know he likes barbaric women. tee hee hee joke lang pow! *wink wink* but i must agree... she's so kawaii! and very amusing too! *grins*
teka... speaking of kawaii...ilang beses bang sinabi ni sendoh ang word na yun (both english and japanese, i think) sa chapters 16 and 17? he seems fond of that word. teehee ^_^;;
'kay... let's go to the topic bout the summary. DUH? HELL! WHO CARES? I CERTAINLY DON'T! wadahellisthatflamer'stalkin'bout? it actually doesn't matter. hindi naman yung summary ang sukatan kung maganda o hindi ang isang story. DAMN IT!
alam mo may nabasa akong book na talagang na-hook ako! AS IN! too bad it's out of print already! waaahhhhh! *floods room with tears* oopppsss! balik na tayo sa topic. it's a book written by Mercedes Lackey, entitled THE LAST HERALD MAGE. err...well it's shounen-ai for you and you know i like shounen-ai. but that's not it... hindi lang yun ang gusto ka sa story... i like the story as a whole... yung feelings, moods, characters, setting, plot... hell! pati na rin yung style of writing! i like everything bout it! i'm totally addicted to it! tulad ng addiction ko sa anime... and you know how addicted i am to anime. ^^;; and the funny thing about the book is... ANG PANGIT NG SUMMARY! AS IN! wala talagang connection! hindi naman yun ang nangyari sa story! sheeshh! and that's a very good example kung bakit hindi naman msukatan ang summary sa quality ng story. i hope you got my point after all those things i said. *sweatdrops profusely*
and about the title... i like it! it's really amusing! teeheehee
and of course... the grammar! well duh! excuse moi! i'd like to point out that NOBODY IS PERFECT! except God of course... i guess?
mas marami pa nga akong grammar mistakes sa mga fic ko and also... even english teachers make mistakes! GRABE HA! SUCH A STUPID THING TO POINT OUT! girl, i've read fics with really, really bad grammar... so bad they gave me headaches... and believe me... wala sa kalahati ng mistakes nila ang mistakes mo. teka... tama ba pagkakasabi ko... or should it be the other way around? gomen nasai. i'm just a mere mortal. ^^;; heck! hindi ko maintindihan yung fic dahil sa grammar errors!
pati na rin dun sa 'pa-cute way' daw ng paghingi mo ng comments and reviews... haaay nakuuuu! grabe na toh! SUPER! ANO BANG PAKI-ALAM MOHHHHHHHH! tama si wadohui... bakit ka nag-review? kakaloko namang buhay to oh! tsk! tsk!
alam mo maemi, sa tingin ko pa-epal lang yung flamer mo. wala sigurong pumapansin sa kanya. teeheehee ngayon meron na db? hmm... good idea yata yun ah. hehehe just joking. ngayon siguro matatahimik na siya dahil finally!... may pumapansin na sa kanya! ^^;; what a weird reasoning i have!
i know i don't have a talent in writing... wala akong kakayahan na makasulat ng isang story na makakakuha ng 147 (take note, 147) reviews! halimaw! never in this lifetime... even in the next lifetimes! isa lang ang masasabi ko...I.LOVE.YOUR.FIC. it really is very amusing...a good break after reading too much angsty fics from x/99 and TB... at hindi ko ito binabasa dahil sa magkaibigan tayo. walang sinuman ang nakakapilit sa kin na gumawa ng kahit anong ayoko namang gawin. pag ayoko... ayoko talaga! kahit itanong mo pa sa mama ko. i hope you get my point. the nerve of that person para sabihin na you're just using friends para dumami ang reviews mo...and using really good writers at that!
another thing... hindi ako mabait! i'm not nice at all! hmph! i'm a bad bad person... you don't have any idea how bad i am! ^^;; really!
and i'm also not a good fic writer. nothing i write is good enuf to be able to attract so much attention. but at least i can appreciate a good fic. i may not show it that much... dahil hindi ako nakaka-review masyado... pero from my point of view, i think your fic is great!
i hope you'll take it easy, ne?
and i hope you'll write more!
dami mo ngang fans eh! ^_~
ganbatte~! mata ne!
1/1/2003 c19 renei
hahaha! ayami! what a laugh... i hope rukawa joins you up the tree... then you'd be like monkeys!
rukawa:do'ahou.
anyway, i can't wait to see what happens next. Now this is a cliffie! Oi! Continue!
hahaha! ayami! what a laugh... i hope rukawa joins you up the tree... then you'd be like monkeys!
rukawa:do'ahou.
anyway, i can't wait to see what happens next. Now this is a cliffie! Oi! Continue!
12/31/2002 c19 unchained
HOI! THIS CHAPTER IS NOT LONG IT IS TOO SHORT! I HAVE SO MANY UNANSWERED QNS!
like why couldn't she go? what the hell are those three stooges (aya, miyagi, mitsui) up to? and most imptly, what's going to happen next?
*scream* this is not good. we are starting the school year soon and that means slower updates *sob* arianne, please, take pity on me...
woooohoooo! i've become addicted to this one! yeah~~!
HOI! THIS CHAPTER IS NOT LONG IT IS TOO SHORT! I HAVE SO MANY UNANSWERED QNS!
like why couldn't she go? what the hell are those three stooges (aya, miyagi, mitsui) up to? and most imptly, what's going to happen next?
*scream* this is not good. we are starting the school year soon and that means slower updates *sob* arianne, please, take pity on me...
woooohoooo! i've become addicted to this one! yeah~~!
12/31/2002 c18 unchained
wooooohoooooooo! SENDOH! why don't you just do that to me? *swoon*
this gets more and more exciting! nyaaaahaha.
wooooohoooooooo! SENDOH! why don't you just do that to me? *swoon*
this gets more and more exciting! nyaaaahaha.
12/31/2002 c17 unchained
this is a really funny chapter because there are too many funny things in here for me to recall all of them okay on to the next one!
*inhale*
this is a really funny chapter because there are too many funny things in here for me to recall all of them okay on to the next one!
*inhale*
12/31/2002 c16 unchained
BWAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHA! we seem to like to do the same thing, which is counting...it was really funny when she started counting how many times sendoh was smiling. i like to count crappy stuff like that, like the no. of ppl wearing giordano shirts or something.
on to the next chapter!
BWAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHA! we seem to like to do the same thing, which is counting...it was really funny when she started counting how many times sendoh was smiling. i like to count crappy stuff like that, like the no. of ppl wearing giordano shirts or something.
on to the next chapter!
12/31/2002 c15 unchained
awww, baby! sweeeeeeet! i just love Ayami in this one! especially when she scolded hentai mitsui *ducks bazookas thrown by mitsui fans*
awww, baby! sweeeeeeet! i just love Ayami in this one! especially when she scolded hentai mitsui *ducks bazookas thrown by mitsui fans*
12/31/2002 c14 unchained
my girl is my absolutely favourite movie! i cried for days on end!
well, hours on end.
weeehoooooo! need to find out more! this just gets better and better!
my girl is my absolutely favourite movie! i cried for days on end!
well, hours on end.
weeehoooooo! need to find out more! this just gets better and better!
12/31/2002 c13 unchained
i loved reading about ayami cleaning the sports hall *sweatdrop*
because from now on I shall vacuum the house screaming "hora hora hora!" nyaaaahahahhaa.
also, i liked the part when they were Accusing Akagi about liking Ayami. muaaaahahahhaa.
i loved reading about ayami cleaning the sports hall *sweatdrop*
because from now on I shall vacuum the house screaming "hora hora hora!" nyaaaahahahhaa.
also, i liked the part when they were Accusing Akagi about liking Ayami. muaaaahahahhaa.
12/31/2002 c19 Shari
MAEMI! let's see... how can i make a nice flame? errmm... ahh, what the heck? i won't flame this because i AM mature. bwehehehe.
anywayz, cute chap. typical rukawa though. still monosyllabic. oh well. (happy birthday ru!)
monkey blood... bwehehehe... is she, by any chance, related to sakuragi and kiyota? bwehehehe.
coolness!
ja!
(decided to borrow your phrases for a while. ehe)
can't wait for part 2!
MAEMI! let's see... how can i make a nice flame? errmm... ahh, what the heck? i won't flame this because i AM mature. bwehehehe.
anywayz, cute chap. typical rukawa though. still monosyllabic. oh well. (happy birthday ru!)
monkey blood... bwehehehe... is she, by any chance, related to sakuragi and kiyota? bwehehehe.
coolness!
ja!
(decided to borrow your phrases for a while. ehe)
can't wait for part 2!
12/31/2002 c19 tensaispira
Nyahhahahahaha!nooooooo..you already left..T_T
hahah you go girl!
Update quickly yah! update today! (1.1.2003)
nyahah!
Nyahhahahahaha!nooooooo..you already left..T_T
hahah you go girl!
Update quickly yah! update today! (1.1.2003)
nyahah!