for ExtraOrdinary Love Quadrangle12/26/2002 c5 
7Hibaku
I'll stop here tonight.
my eyes are begging me to stop for myopia's sake...
don't bother about the person downthere. Flames are personal, biased opinions by people who don't care to grasp the true meaning of the fic and who conclude the meaning of the fic before they even bother to read it properly. Don't worry about it being Mary-Sue, because in my opinion, this is in no way a Mary Sue. Who said Ayami's flawless? She isn't... And this is NOT a Mary Sue.
I repeat.
This is NOT a Mary-Sue.
I'll continue tomorrow, my eyes are trying to kowtow... (~_~)
7HibakuI'll stop here tonight.
my eyes are begging me to stop for myopia's sake...
don't bother about the person downthere. Flames are personal, biased opinions by people who don't care to grasp the true meaning of the fic and who conclude the meaning of the fic before they even bother to read it properly. Don't worry about it being Mary-Sue, because in my opinion, this is in no way a Mary Sue. Who said Ayami's flawless? She isn't... And this is NOT a Mary Sue.
I repeat.
This is NOT a Mary-Sue.
I'll continue tomorrow, my eyes are trying to kowtow... (~_~)
12/25/2002 c18 7blablahblergh
hey, bitch
ang kapal naman ng mukha mo para sabihin yan sa ate ko, ha! alam ko na entitled tayong lahat sa sarili nating opinion pero bakit ka naman ganyan? mashado ka naman ata... e kung ikaw kaya maka receive ng flame na ganyan?
oo na... wala na akong pake kase business to ng ate ko pero nakakaawa kase sha e... ginagawa mo shang eng-eng... e hindi naman... kung ayaw mo ng mary-sue, fine! e di dapat di mo na to binasa pa dahil lang sa mga review nila renei at shari!
naasar ka lang siguro dahil sinabihan ka ng ate ko na bad a ng grammar mo... ewan ko kung totoo yun... pero she's just helping! STUPID!
how dare you say na ang mga nag rereview dito ay stupid! e di stupid ka rin dahil nag review ka!
PATHETIC MORON!~!
that's it for NOW...
7blablahblerghhey, bitch
ang kapal naman ng mukha mo para sabihin yan sa ate ko, ha! alam ko na entitled tayong lahat sa sarili nating opinion pero bakit ka naman ganyan? mashado ka naman ata... e kung ikaw kaya maka receive ng flame na ganyan?
oo na... wala na akong pake kase business to ng ate ko pero nakakaawa kase sha e... ginagawa mo shang eng-eng... e hindi naman... kung ayaw mo ng mary-sue, fine! e di dapat di mo na to binasa pa dahil lang sa mga review nila renei at shari!
naasar ka lang siguro dahil sinabihan ka ng ate ko na bad a ng grammar mo... ewan ko kung totoo yun... pero she's just helping! STUPID!
how dare you say na ang mga nag rereview dito ay stupid! e di stupid ka rin dahil nag review ka!
PATHETIC MORON!~!
that's it for NOW...
12/25/2002 c18 Guest
THIS.IS.INSANE.
119 reviews? you got 119 reviews? now THAT'S unbelievable...how can this fic have that much review when it's just a piece of crap?
sheesh... maybe you're reviewers are either too damn nice or just plain stupid...
why do i loathe (mind you, i don't HATE this, i LOATHE it ok? ^_^) this fic? let me tell you the reasons...
1. it's obviously a mary-sue which means, this really suck BIG TIME
2. it's too damn fuckin long... sheesh...
3. your plot is so annoyingly predictable
4. your summary's not a summary... it merely describes what YOU think of your story... as if i give a damn about that!
5. your title sucks... i mean what's so extraordinary about this? and a quadrangle? please... can't you think of a more creative title?
6. your grammar is bad... and you had the nerve to tell me off when you reviewed MY fic... pathetic.
7. you're always fishing for compliments at the end of your story...(it's really irritating how you make "pa-cute")
...well, i guess that's about it... i noticed that i'm the first flamer here... you should feel honored i even wasted time to review this...
i don't even know WHY i read this...maybe because the other fics posted here are really boring or they're also just a piece of crap...just like yours...^_^
anyway, i was attracted to the no. of reviews and when i checked your review page, i saw shari and renei's name (the best authors here! and you're NOTHING compared to them,stick that to your mind) and i thought, maybe this fic is not bad since THEY reviewed
but god... i made a wrong move...
i bet you're friends with those two and you asked them to review this so it'll attract more reviewers...and a give you a point for that. it attracted ME
now, this is the perfect example of what eliar discussed on of his fic's chap... i noticed that you didn't review that chap...maybe it hit right smack like that!
oh well...i guess this is enough...for now...
one advice sweetie...stop all of this bullshit...ok?
~sincerly yours,
onehellofabitch ;p
THIS.IS.INSANE.
119 reviews? you got 119 reviews? now THAT'S unbelievable...how can this fic have that much review when it's just a piece of crap?
sheesh... maybe you're reviewers are either too damn nice or just plain stupid...
why do i loathe (mind you, i don't HATE this, i LOATHE it ok? ^_^) this fic? let me tell you the reasons...
1. it's obviously a mary-sue which means, this really suck BIG TIME
2. it's too damn fuckin long... sheesh...
3. your plot is so annoyingly predictable
4. your summary's not a summary... it merely describes what YOU think of your story... as if i give a damn about that!
5. your title sucks... i mean what's so extraordinary about this? and a quadrangle? please... can't you think of a more creative title?
6. your grammar is bad... and you had the nerve to tell me off when you reviewed MY fic... pathetic.
7. you're always fishing for compliments at the end of your story...(it's really irritating how you make "pa-cute")
...well, i guess that's about it... i noticed that i'm the first flamer here... you should feel honored i even wasted time to review this...
i don't even know WHY i read this...maybe because the other fics posted here are really boring or they're also just a piece of crap...just like yours...^_^
anyway, i was attracted to the no. of reviews and when i checked your review page, i saw shari and renei's name (the best authors here! and you're NOTHING compared to them,stick that to your mind) and i thought, maybe this fic is not bad since THEY reviewed
but god... i made a wrong move...
i bet you're friends with those two and you asked them to review this so it'll attract more reviewers...and a give you a point for that. it attracted ME
now, this is the perfect example of what eliar discussed on of his fic's chap... i noticed that you didn't review that chap...maybe it hit right smack like that!
oh well...i guess this is enough...for now...
one advice sweetie...stop all of this bullshit...ok?
~sincerly yours,
onehellofabitch ;p
12/25/2002 c18 micchan1
hiii! hey tnx 4 sendin' me
that greetin' thingy!
hehehe it was sooo cool!
nd bt the way i really lyk ur fic!
i mean it's so cute and funny
nd kinda mushy! :)
hiii! hey tnx 4 sendin' me
that greetin' thingy!
hehehe it was sooo cool!
nd bt the way i really lyk ur fic!
i mean it's so cute and funny
nd kinda mushy! :)
12/25/2002 c18 Shari
See… told ya na babawi ako sa lahat ng chaps na di ko na-review! :) hmm… so now it’s gonna be a geometric shape involving Sendoh, Mitsui, Rukawa, Ayami, Sakuragi and Haruko… I wonder who’ll end up with whom. You’ve done a pretty good job of pulling me both ways… I kinda want it to be Ayami x Sakuragi or Ayami x Rukawa. I guess I’ll have to read your entire fic to find out the ending, eh? No problemo! :)
See… told ya na babawi ako sa lahat ng chaps na di ko na-review! :) hmm… so now it’s gonna be a geometric shape involving Sendoh, Mitsui, Rukawa, Ayami, Sakuragi and Haruko… I wonder who’ll end up with whom. You’ve done a pretty good job of pulling me both ways… I kinda want it to be Ayami x Sakuragi or Ayami x Rukawa. I guess I’ll have to read your entire fic to find out the ending, eh? No problemo! :)
12/25/2002 c17 Shari
Ehe… Perverted Smiley Psycho… bwehehe… nice name! Sendoh *does* smile a lot… no wonder people think he’s leering. Oh well… wait a minute… didn’t I already review this chappie with renei? Hmm… oh who cares? Go Ayami! Bwehehehe
Ehe… Perverted Smiley Psycho… bwehehe… nice name! Sendoh *does* smile a lot… no wonder people think he’s leering. Oh well… wait a minute… didn’t I already review this chappie with renei? Hmm… oh who cares? Go Ayami! Bwehehehe
12/25/2002 c15 Shari
“You’d look uglier if you cry” - bwehehe… how like a guy to say that. But it’s enough to make girls stop crying, ne? Another sentimental, well-written chapter. Three cheers for maemi! Yey! Woohoo, go Ayami! Still not letting Mitsui take advantage of her, eh? Hehe
“You’d look uglier if you cry” - bwehehe… how like a guy to say that. But it’s enough to make girls stop crying, ne? Another sentimental, well-written chapter. Three cheers for maemi! Yey! Woohoo, go Ayami! Still not letting Mitsui take advantage of her, eh? Hehe
12/25/2002 c14 Shari
You know what? I actually had tears in my eyes by the time I finished reading this chapter. It was so sad, but eerie how well you captured the sad parts and put it into words. I am such a sucker for sad things: movies, songs, stories, etc. My brother says I’m a crybaby. Arrghh… I watched “My Girl”, too. I also cried when Thomas Jay died. ::sighs::
You know what? I actually had tears in my eyes by the time I finished reading this chapter. It was so sad, but eerie how well you captured the sad parts and put it into words. I am such a sucker for sad things: movies, songs, stories, etc. My brother says I’m a crybaby. Arrghh… I watched “My Girl”, too. I also cried when Thomas Jay died. ::sighs::
12/25/2002 c13 Still still Shari
Woohoo… the return of the magic bag! Bwehehehe… Ayami sure talks a lot. I don’t blame her. She has to make up for Rukawa’s lack of conversational skills. Hehehe… Uh-oh, looks like Rukawa fans may kill me for that remark.
Woohoo… the return of the magic bag! Bwehehehe… Ayami sure talks a lot. I don’t blame her. She has to make up for Rukawa’s lack of conversational skills. Hehehe… Uh-oh, looks like Rukawa fans may kill me for that remark.
12/25/2002 c12 Shari again hmmm
Yup, that’s Rukawa alright… selfish and determined. He’s a really good player, but he isn’t a team player :: sighs:: And baka Mitsui! He actually laughed when Ayami said she liked Sakuragi. But somehow, it strikes me as something Mitsui WOULD do. bwehehe… Once again, another nicely written chap!
Yup, that’s Rukawa alright… selfish and determined. He’s a really good player, but he isn’t a team player :: sighs:: And baka Mitsui! He actually laughed when Ayami said she liked Sakuragi. But somehow, it strikes me as something Mitsui WOULD do. bwehehe… Once again, another nicely written chap!
12/25/2002 c11 Shari again
Cool poem… I wish I could write nice poems. Unfortunately, I’m cursed with being un-poetic. I’ll have to content myself with reading poems written by people like you :) Sad chapter though… well, not exactly sad, but wistful, I guess. Lots of sighing. It sure sucks when the person you like likes someone else. But it’s still a cool chap. Touching. Oh, di ba? :)
Cool poem… I wish I could write nice poems. Unfortunately, I’m cursed with being un-poetic. I’ll have to content myself with reading poems written by people like you :) Sad chapter though… well, not exactly sad, but wistful, I guess. Lots of sighing. It sure sucks when the person you like likes someone else. But it’s still a cool chap. Touching. Oh, di ba? :)
12/25/2002 c10 Still Shari
Whew… I’m really flooding up your review page, huh? Her “magic bag”? bwehehe… yup, sure sounds like magic. I mean, how many people carry extra bentos, pillows and first aid kits in their bags? Okay, I know I’ve said this before, but Ayami is cool! I like her!
Whew… I’m really flooding up your review page, huh? Her “magic bag”? bwehehe… yup, sure sounds like magic. I mean, how many people carry extra bentos, pillows and first aid kits in their bags? Okay, I know I’ve said this before, but Ayami is cool! I like her!
12/25/2002 c9 Still Shari
Bwehehehe… Shohoku sure has quite an assortment of teachers! They have sadistic ones, hentai ones, etc. bwehehehe… Nice touch! I really think Ayami is cool. She’s sincere, sarcastic, violent, sweet… she has lots of dimensions to her personality.
Bwehehehe… Shohoku sure has quite an assortment of teachers! They have sadistic ones, hentai ones, etc. bwehehehe… Nice touch! I really think Ayami is cool. She’s sincere, sarcastic, violent, sweet… she has lots of dimensions to her personality.
12/25/2002 c8 Shari yet again
Awww… a pillow… how sweet. Good thing Rukawa didn’t take it, though. I agree with him: he might drool all over it. THAT would be gross. But Ayami could be sweet, aside from violent, if she wants to be. And her “thoughts” are realistic. Sometimes I find myself thinking like her. Which is not a bad thing, I assure you :) Good chappie!
Awww… a pillow… how sweet. Good thing Rukawa didn’t take it, though. I agree with him: he might drool all over it. THAT would be gross. But Ayami could be sweet, aside from violent, if she wants to be. And her “thoughts” are realistic. Sometimes I find myself thinking like her. Which is not a bad thing, I assure you :) Good chappie!
12/25/2002 c7 Shari Again
Nice job on describing the basketball moves. Simple, but you got the point across. It’s way better than other people who try to make elaborate descriptions but end up with stupid basketball terms (like fade away-dunk. Hello?). Bwehehehe, hentai Mitsui!
Nice job on describing the basketball moves. Simple, but you got the point across. It’s way better than other people who try to make elaborate descriptions but end up with stupid basketball terms (like fade away-dunk. Hello?). Bwehehehe, hentai Mitsui!