5/16/2013 c1 Thranduil's Party Moose VIII
Hi! I love your story but it was all a bit too sudden and the only door was in the pink palace. I really like it though it was very good.

5/15/2013 c1 PianoLegend
Soo Longg:o

5/14/2013 c1 1PenguinCullen06
omg lisa I love ur story! :D ofcourse ive read it before but its amazing! :D I love the detail u put in and the ending was so cool! You should post another chapter on a different child's story :D update your other story too! :D