for The Baker and the Sheriff9/28 c4 Angry-Sama
Robotic telling and not showing writing. Jacob imprinting on one of the Lupin's. Them even using the name Lupin when Teddy should be Harry's son not little brother! Nonsense author who writes like they are copying the dictionary not a story!
Robotic telling and not showing writing. Jacob imprinting on one of the Lupin's. Them even using the name Lupin when Teddy should be Harry's son not little brother! Nonsense author who writes like they are copying the dictionary not a story!
8/29 c30 Guest
Great story love the plot twist.
Great story love the plot twist.
6/24 c6 lucifyr04
Damn the conversations sounds like robots talking or something. It's too monotonous
Damn the conversations sounds like robots talking or something. It's too monotonous
35/3 c30 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter!
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter!
5/2 c30 lady sesshomaru sama 949
I'm glad that Bella is getting better but the vampires have no idea what's coming if they piss Harry off
I'm glad that Bella is getting better but the vampires have no idea what's coming if they piss Harry off
2/18 c29 NADS
You should finish it it s really good
if you need an idea you can have the volturi come not for battle or war just to talk then what if harry was related to aro or Marcus though descendent
You should finish it it s really good
if you need an idea you can have the volturi come not for battle or war just to talk then what if harry was related to aro or Marcus though descendent