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12/8/2015 c1 Guest
nice
5/14/2015 c1 QADER
NO FLAMES PLEASE
5/14/2015 c1 LAWL BAWSS
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7/19/2013 c1 varun
the poem is interestingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggg
7/18/2013 c1 6T5Tango
Aww, I loved this! I love how you interwove the scene and song from the opening into this poem. And with the last line, I really felt that you were reaching beyond the first scene of the movie and into the ending of the film as well. The Lion King is all about coming of age and finding your place in the Circle of Life and I really felt like you captured that lesson in this poem.

I like how you say that the Circle of Life is the first thing you see, because that is so true, the moment any creature is born, it sees the movement of life and spends the rest of its life trying to find its place in that circle.

I also loved the description of the king, both current and future and how the animals cheer for them. The way you worded everything gave the scene very colorful visuals.

This was very well done! Great work!
7/7/2013 c1 Jacie
I love it good work

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