
6/5/2020 c1 Brandon
VERY GOOD BOOK
but you CAN'T end it like that.
VERY GOOD BOOK
but you CAN'T end it like that.
7/22/2016 c1
25Dragonling743
Wow, fudge me. That was intense. Like seriously super epic level intensity right here. I know all of those words are out of place but dude(ette?) this right here is why I dig through the twilight fandom. This story is the diamond in the rough that gives me hope for these characters.
Man, I can only hope that you continue writing, and don't take offense at all of my antecedents being masculine because that is how I roll. This is awesome. I can't wait to read your other stuff

Wow, fudge me. That was intense. Like seriously super epic level intensity right here. I know all of those words are out of place but dude(ette?) this right here is why I dig through the twilight fandom. This story is the diamond in the rough that gives me hope for these characters.
Man, I can only hope that you continue writing, and don't take offense at all of my antecedents being masculine because that is how I roll. This is awesome. I can't wait to read your other stuff
11/13/2013 c1
1SMFirefly
A part of me wants you to "fix it"...that is, keep going, because I don't want a sad ending. Silly, I know. :P
I do think that this is mirroring situations that happen in real life. People who are unstable will do damaging things to continue to "feel" something for the person they fixate upon. Staying with a person she does not respect, just to be near the person who renders her helpless to her own crushing feelings, is not as uncommon as people think it is.
Thank you for sharing this glimpse into the piece of Bella's tragedy. I think it's cautionary in nature.

A part of me wants you to "fix it"...that is, keep going, because I don't want a sad ending. Silly, I know. :P
I do think that this is mirroring situations that happen in real life. People who are unstable will do damaging things to continue to "feel" something for the person they fixate upon. Staying with a person she does not respect, just to be near the person who renders her helpless to her own crushing feelings, is not as uncommon as people think it is.
Thank you for sharing this glimpse into the piece of Bella's tragedy. I think it's cautionary in nature.
10/3/2013 c1
13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Holy shit that's deep, and Bella better be glad he can't read her mind. Although that may be interesting to explain. :/

Holy shit that's deep, and Bella better be glad he can't read her mind. Although that may be interesting to explain. :/
7/3/2013 c1
7SwanQueenLvr13
Wow! That was hauntingly beautiful. I love the self torture she puts herslf through. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

Wow! That was hauntingly beautiful. I love the self torture she puts herslf through. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
6/11/2013 c1
14xDreamlessx
Abstract and angsty stream of consciousness - my kind of fic, lol. Can't believe I never saw this till now. Needless to say, the writing is a severed head and shoulders above most other Bellice. Brilliant use of imagery and vocabulary. But I thought you were going to save this for TTOIMS?

Abstract and angsty stream of consciousness - my kind of fic, lol. Can't believe I never saw this till now. Needless to say, the writing is a severed head and shoulders above most other Bellice. Brilliant use of imagery and vocabulary. But I thought you were going to save this for TTOIMS?
5/17/2013 c1
1Bubba Mayo
Loved it, stories like this are truly very awesome and hard to find. The joys of angst and unobtainable love. I wish you luck in your endeavors.
Lord Dimladris

Loved it, stories like this are truly very awesome and hard to find. The joys of angst and unobtainable love. I wish you luck in your endeavors.
Lord Dimladris