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4/2/2014 c5 paradisoFinder
Idk what to say
8/18/2013 c5 8Mitspeiler
Very nice, though I think it would have been more effective if it were longer (says the guy that has started half a million 10000 word stories since April and not finished a one of them). This idea I think, has a lot more potential. I demand you create a whole AU around the subject. Maybe the game is how Jade's psyche starts piecing itself back together...somehow.
6/21/2013 c5 Guest
Holy Crap. I read the last chapter and eerything didn't make sense, until I went back and read it all and everything clicked. That's a good writing feat. i loved this, so much. You have no clue.
6/19/2013 c2 uglybuttlosermeanie
While I'm not sure entirely what's going on plotwise, I really like reading this! You portray the characters quite nicely, but one tip is maybe restrict Dave from saying Egderp as often. It's not canon of him. But otherwise, excellent job! :)

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