for Promise not to leave10/25/2013 c3 RoseQuartz1
So...is this the end of the story. Cus if it is I suppose it's a pretty good place to end. _ :) And we got taht kiss we all wanted too. _ XD
So...is this the end of the story. Cus if it is I suppose it's a pretty good place to end. _ :) And we got taht kiss we all wanted too. _ XD
10/21/2013 c3 Roboferret
OOOOHHH ahhhh :) kissing 3
This was good! Although, Maka was a bit... Mood swingy, I guess, like she was all depressed and soul kissed her and then straight away she was happy, which I get she would be happier, but make the transition a little slower, describe how she's crying but the happiness surfaced slowly.
Good job :)
OOOOHHH ahhhh :) kissing 3
This was good! Although, Maka was a bit... Mood swingy, I guess, like she was all depressed and soul kissed her and then straight away she was happy, which I get she would be happier, but make the transition a little slower, describe how she's crying but the happiness surfaced slowly.
Good job :)
7/22/2013 c1 
3littleliebling
Great first fic and a good pairing thingy
Soul was a little OOC in the first chapter but that's pretty much gone now. There were also a couple of spelling/grammar errors but that's okay.
On the other hand, Maka is REALLY in character, you did a great job there!
Good plot idea too, spirit dying :) kinda made me sad though !
And you weren't melodramatic at all, it was good.
3littlelieblingGreat first fic and a good pairing thingy
Soul was a little OOC in the first chapter but that's pretty much gone now. There were also a couple of spelling/grammar errors but that's okay.
On the other hand, Maka is REALLY in character, you did a great job there!
Good plot idea too, spirit dying :) kinda made me sad though !
And you weren't melodramatic at all, it was good.
5/18/2013 c1 Guest
My pen name is Brunette Beauty12 if you want to send any messages to me. I like your story. the twist in the plot is nice. Souls personality is a bit different in the anime. it's good thought I'd like to read more please update soon.
My pen name is Brunette Beauty12 if you want to send any messages to me. I like your story. the twist in the plot is nice. Souls personality is a bit different in the anime. it's good thought I'd like to read more please update soon.